Topic: I Lay Here
EveningKiss's photo
Thu 01/03/08 03:24 PM
I Lay Here
By: EveningKiss


I lay here in chains.
Chains that keep me here,
And won't let me free.
I lay here in Chains,
For I am bound by my word.

I lay here with scars.
Deep wounds that won't heal,
And never stop hurting,
I lay here with scars,
For I am to keep silent.

I lay here blindfolded.
Unable to see what's happening,
And am made to see only darkness.
I lay here blindfolded,
For I was blinded for what I saw.

I lay here in silence.
The silence that scares me,
And scares me so much.
I lay here in silence,
For I have nothing to say.

I lay here alone.
No one comes to see me,
And I can't see them.
I lay here alone,
For you left me here alone.

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Thu 01/03/08 03:29 PM
Well, put EveningKiss I like the descriptive nature of the poem very well put. Great poem flowerforyou

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Thu 01/03/08 03:42 PM
Awesome write. I like it very much. Thank you for sharing.

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/03/08 09:27 PM
in chains,
in silence,
in darkness,
alone....

you have covered it all nicely

flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 01/03/08 11:18 PM
Ahh, very nicely written EveningKiss. An artist's touch even in the throes of pain and you bring out it's imagery so well.