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...Thus thru the threads of a troubled start
Thru the torn, and tattered, tarnished heart, That try's to heal the hurt of a hunted past Heal the pain lit by the shadow cast the pain, tethered to hope, love lashed down, not willing to last Trying to cope,Trying not to sever, the last holding tether, of my my hearts clever hopeless endeavor that, will continue forever... and ever what do you think? I wrote it a while ago (more than a year) and want to update it |
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 good job
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I think it's great the way it is.
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