Topic: Dark thoughts anyone
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Sat 11/25/06 07:45 AM



Just some thoughts of your soul




Does anybody know what time it is ?

How can you tell time when the noon darkness has fallen.

Hope for a birthday candle blowing in the wind to light your way.

Listen to what the darkness has to say.

Does it call you to join in the abyss

Do you run blind bumping into your life ?

Do you stop and fear the sound of your own breath ?

Are your eyes open or are you dreaming

Do you dream

Do you live

Do you inhale

Scream

Feel the hairs prickle the back of your neck

Are you even alive

Are you standing dead

Are you feeling like part of the darkness

Are you fading away

Would fading away be better than the truth

The truth is darkness falls and it takes energy to bring the light

Do you have the energy

Your fading

goodbye




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Sat 11/25/06 08:18 AM
theres a book you should read,it's "Atlas Shrugged" by Ayn Rand

your poem reminds me of that book/

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Sat 11/25/06 09:27 AM
thanks for reply
the things that come out of my head just flow and end up where they do .