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I was hoping someone would rate my profile. Let me know if I should add more. Any input would be appreciated.
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Good Luck
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The first sentence is fluff. We all find it hard to talk about ourselves but if you are a successful salesman you should find writing a profile easier than most.
The second sentence is pointless. Rather than say you have lots of hobbies and interests, talk about them. In marketing terms, you are the product. What are the main features of the product, including the USP? Add a paragraph or two about the kind of woman you want to meet. Getting there .. best wishes. |
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