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Edited by
Poetrywriter
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Wed 06/02/21 07:21 AM
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Profile is not the best in the world but it is not the worst either. In my opinion more people in these forums are closer to old school so I would remove the slang abbreviation HMU since not everyone will know what that means. I would remove the last line about the fakes. That is negativity which is something the ladies do not want to see. You should maybe include in your write up the kind of woman you are looking for. Your profile is very basic so if basic is what you want then it is ok.
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Yes it is very basic but you at least have a bit filled in . Which is a start .
You can always add to it as you go along . Maybe add some more detail in the about me section about yourself and as poetry stated perhaps something about the kind of person you are looking for . I would swap your first picture with the last one and have that as your profile one as it’s a lot clearer . I’d say get rid of the fake bit , cus even though there are fakes , people just get fed up of seeing it on someone’s profile , and scammers and fakes don’t even look at that , so it’s not going to deter them . |
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Loki the most attractive part in your profile is your profession and to an extent your pictures. The end.
Remaining parts are absolute put-offs! The tag line "full of fakes" is insulting. You don't walk into a room and declare that all are fakes and expect to be welcomed! The "about" section is sketchy, to put it very conservatively! You may consider a makeover. |
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