Topic: Real Surreal Truth
sealove42's photo
Wed 12/26/07 09:43 PM
Pondering the moment
time sits still.
The clouds melt together
where it becomes the until.
The grasp of possibility
the slow motion of time.
Somewhere it meshes.
A lemon turns into a lime.

Watch closely, wandering about
was that your mind I read.
When you passed by,
you said the thoughts in my head.
Conscience delusion, convincing enough
Sounding on cue, rehearsed
Believing this is tough.

I sit and ponder God or physics.
computer graphic, Divine intervention
It all seems to have a purpose
Or was this man devise of his own convention.
Atlas a moment where Faith steps in.
One way was to the real surreal.
Faith, love and hope is that where I have been?

A strange way to go, but that is to wonder
is all but asking for complete truth.
Philisophical confusion, alluding to
disrupting, alluding the mood.
Ponder, wonder, question and ask why.
I'm attached to a Love I've never known,
but I am searching for where true may lie.

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 12/26/07 09:53 PM
Nice....A good one to think by. :smile:

sealove42's photo
Wed 12/26/07 10:03 PM
Thanks, thinking alot tonight-- I still need to get the grove of flow down... some read better than others, and I love symbolism in poetry, but I have trouble writing it. In time...

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 12/26/07 10:10 PM
Very cool. As long as ya write from your heart, everything will eventually fall into place. :smile:

sealove42's photo
Thu 12/27/07 09:38 PM
Thanks I had an ok day yesterday.... ah well