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caper_girl34 Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 32	Thu 12/20/07 07:42 AM
So many times, I longed for the day. You would come, and take me away. Missing your touch, the sweetness of your lips. Your arms around me, the feelings I miss. When Im with you, all time stands still. We are as one, Bodies fulfilled. One touch from you, my bodies on fire. You fill my heart, with so much desire. You look in my eyes, you see through to my soul. Never have I felt, The loss of controle. Written by me

peachiegirl28 Joined Sun 09/16/07 Posts: 19292	Thu 12/20/07 07:42 AM
very romantic

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 12/20/07 07:43 AM


caper_girl34 Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 32	Thu 12/20/07 07:45 AM
Thank you.

johncarl Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 5074	Thu 12/20/07 07:47 AM


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Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 12/20/07 08:19 AM
That was really heartfelt...I liked that.

songstress1 Joined Sun 11/18/07 Posts: 1244	Thu 12/20/07 08:23 AM


Blackfox12 Joined Tue 12/18/07 Posts: 4330	Thu 12/20/07 08:55 AM Edited by Blackfox12 on Thu 12/20/07 08:55 AM
Great words to a beautiful poem

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