Topic: one of my poems
snash02's photo
Thu 12/20/07 03:45 AM
Litton Path
Open hearted pain she feels everyday it seems so real.
Moments of laughter stopped with a tear
Eyes so full of strength a path she’ll always fear
When awake or in dreams
She’ll always prevail
Hearts are lost and bricks are gained
Dreams are shattered
As new ones begin
She sheds a tear
And watches it fall
Then stands up
And brushes herself off
The door is closed
But a window will open
Fear begins
Then is trampled by hope
Loss is received
Then love bring her faith
That in the dark
Their’s always a flame
A candle waiting at the end
Of a path she wish’s she would have never taken
And with this hope , fear , heart breaks and bricks
She’ll never look back
Always look ahead
Always look forward
Every day is towards the flame
Till the day its close enough That she no longer feels pain
Strength will no longer be the path she fears
Because she’ll realize
That it was always there So she can take down the bricks
And escape her fears So by this never again
being trampled by the things she fears No more tear
And broken hearts
Just a feeling she’ll never explain
And a candle she’ll always trust to light her way

CaRisLOVE's photo
Thu 12/20/07 03:58 AM
dat was lovely..
poetry rules
:heart:

snash02's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:21 AM

dat was lovely..
poetry rules
:heart:
aww well thank you

CaRisLOVE's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:21 AM
yw

eskimo_nell's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:23 AM
nice poem snash :wink:

snash02's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:27 AM

nice poem snash :wink:
thank you very much

s1owhand's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:29 AM
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"i like that"

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snash02's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:33 AM

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"i like that"

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THANK YOU

zman000081's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:39 AM
Very nice :wink:

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Thu 12/20/07 04:43 AM
Wickedly intense, please share more with us Snashflowerforyou

snash02's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:46 AM

Very nice :wink:
thanks

snash02's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:46 AM

Wickedly intense, please share more with us Snashflowerforyou
i will deff thanks for reading

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Thu 12/20/07 09:05 AM
Just beautiful

LAMom's photo
Thu 12/20/07 09:07 AM
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KosmoJoe's photo
Thu 12/20/07 09:33 AM
Wow,got my engine purring,your such an pure of heart waiting ta earn ya wings. Angel u r. I enjoyed it.
Good luck. Fly straight and do right.

snash02's photo
Thu 12/20/07 06:46 PM

Just beautiful
aww thank you so much

snash02's photo
Thu 12/20/07 06:47 PM

Wow,got my engine purring,your such an pure of heart waiting ta earn ya wings. Angel u r. I enjoyed it.
Good luck. Fly straight and do right.
wow thank you so very much your too sweet hun that meant alot

snash02's photo
Thu 12/20/07 06:47 PM

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thanks for reading