want flow, u got it, read at your own pace, deff a toungue twister lol

I've mastered the art...of killing a beat...then stashin the evidence...
its not a slack in skill...but a lack of intelligence...
that keeps cats desolate...the traps they're embedded in...
sheer wackness...the trash is embelished with...
paragraphs of letters sent...there in stands the irrelavence...
peers capture the sediments...in cracks of left sentiments...
where kids bask in precedence...and laugh at the presidents...
that think gas is worth blooded hands of several killed...
but relax we're Americans...greedy assed and desperate...
sure we've had our hesitence...and ask for reverence...
just to mask the fact...we casually act as though we care a bit...
when the anthrax develops in...
our land so delicate...kids grab a flag and hit...
any cat thats Arabic...or just shares their heritage...
I long for the day that man can master his ignorance...

I've mastered the art...of delivering...lines with a meaning...
my most basic thoughts'.... palms lie on the ceiling...
but why is it seeming...the only style that's appealing...
just happens to be shared...with 9 other beings...
to minds I'm a genius...even blinds could've seen it...
organized in a sequence...infinite till it weakens...
just try and repeat it...and you'll finally believe in...
the simple fact...that it would be ill advised to read it...
unless u want eyes that are bleeding...a hairline recieding...
your life is depleated...because time will have eaten...
your insides...with the appetite of a demon......
or die while you're sleeping...since I will have beaten...
any sign of your breathing...with rhyme that'll ceace it...
purify and delete it...to show that lyrics this divine are the reasons...

I've mastered the art...of capturing hearts...through out the ages...
even though...there are those...who doubt this statement...
we as humans...are too bound to face it...fools bound in chains with...
conformity...conservatives...who frown on changes...
only see the common ground...when...your down on the pavement...
from loose rounds and sprayed clips...leave 2 down and weightless...
while a slew drown adjacent...to the depth...only a few found complacent...
like desert sand...only a few grounds remain still...
counting 10 seconds of thought...soon while the brains killed...
never be too proud to say ****...and you'll mount the stage with...
a new sound...too loud...to mute down...amazing...
then when you're crowned the greatest...you can pass the flame...
on to those down...who now...sees you as their new found inspiration...

Ok....dude...you know i already love your stuff lol

but this surpasses it all hun...



Its....AMAZING...

its damn ****ing amazing haha...

too strong of a compliment??

uuuh! I want to hear it mixed down with a beat... say something like the national anthem mixed into a beat?

Very cool.

A national anthem rap? hmmmm, intriguing............

im not sure its so much an anthem...It sounds like he's breaking down our country to show its true colors...

hope im right hun haha

Which is why I think a national anthem rap is intriguing, a Country that actually admits to its mistakes in rhythm and with a heck of a lot of luck and desire, possibly could grow from it.....

just a rambling thought

beautyfulrae- lol told ya id bring the flow lol thank u once again

steelangel- listn to Gorilla Zoe-Hood N**** Instrumentals or Dj Khaled Im So Hood Instrumental ,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hH2WMsguIG4&feature=related

any of um work, i just tried it to all 3, the only change is the speed of the lyrics, all work with it ok, im sure i could find better ones tho or make one that would fit it perfect.

bethany-thank ya

both are correct i tried to break it down and look at the acts of this country, now all i gotta do is find a national anthem beat and see how well this works lol

haha...how about the star bangled banner?? jp