Topic: Just a little poem that popped in my head... had to write it
JaymeStephens84a0lc's photo
Tue 12/18/07 10:03 PM
Sick to death of being alone,
No one really sees
What exactly I would give
To give the best of me

Same man, different face
Time and time again
Been burned so many times,
but still wanting to let someone in.

I am not the perfect woman
A size 2 I cannot fit
I seem to not be good enough
Beside me you do not sit.

I do not play the damsel,
You do not see my pain
Strong enough to save myself
From the chugging train

Just want someone to care
Enough to not run away
To love me more than life
And kiss me every day.


lavos28's photo
Tue 12/18/07 10:05 PM
thats really good...heres a poem i wroteI wonder why things happen the way they do
Not to long ago i was you.

It's so hard to watch your life flash before your eyes
I'll never forget the words you said; especially the lies.

I was so blinded that i couldn't even see;
What you said went right past me.

I knew you never cared, it all was fake
but you wanted everything you could possibly take.

I cared so much but I wasen't good enough
I'm giving up now, I don't give a fcuk.

Live your life and i'll live mine
all I have to do is give it some time.

It's not going to be easy but i'm going to try
I wish it wasen't so hard to say goodbye.

I don't need you or anyone else
I can do just fine by myself.

I'm waking up and realizing the cold hearted truth
I didn't want to believe that i was simpily used.

How could you be so strong to just break my heart in two?
I knew i'd get hurt but i never thought by you.

You lied to my friends and you lied to me
I guess everything wasen't ment to be.

I don't want you so don't ever come back
This is the end and it's going to stay like that.

I don't want you or your bull**** in my life
I wish i never met you, it would have been nice.

It's time to move on and forget the past
It will soon fade but the memories will last.

I'm not going to worry about anything especially you
We're done, It's over,Fcuk it,I'm threw.

JD8502's photo
Tue 12/18/07 10:11 PM
LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JaymeStephens84a0lc's photo
Tue 12/18/07 10:13 PM
Um, it was to no one in particular. I've not had any break ups in months...lol, tyvm. Your's sounds rather angry... mine is meant with gentle tones...

lavos28's photo
Tue 12/18/07 10:16 PM
lol yeah i guess i am a bit bitter

pennyg281's photo
Tue 12/18/07 10:21 PM


Jayme I feel the same way. Loved your poem. Describes perfectly how I feel. flowerforyou

JaymeStephens84a0lc's photo
Tue 12/18/07 10:28 PM
Aww, thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I love your curly red hair, btw, very pretty!