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No, this isn't a poem about me losing Dena. I know where my other half is...she just isn't here. But she gave me the title and I ran with it. Hope you like it.
Where Is My Other Half Where is my other half The key to my heart, The only one I love And has been from the start. She owns the only key That will unlock this love Where is my other half That has been sent to me from above. Where is my other half That has the single key, To unlock my inner soul Who was sent, just for me Has anybody seen her Tell her I'm in dismay A heart that is broken Hoping to mend some day. Where is my other half Let her know she is missed, A heart that needs mended And two lips that need kissed. If you see her, tell her please The beautiful light of mine, I am waiting to be unlocked To be with me, forever in time. |
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wonderfull
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This is a beautiful poem! Very well written and well, amazing.
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so romantic
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usually i do not read the poems and things on these forums. but for some reason this caught my attention. perhaps because i can kind of relate. Its the question we all have.
Thank you for sharing! |
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Thank you all for your quick comments...wow..
fastlinnie, mainelyme, and one of my favorite sisters, Pam. I appreciate them all. |
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usually i do not read the poems and things on these forums. but for some reason this caught my attention. perhaps because i can kind of relate. Its the question we all have. Thank you for sharing! Poetry is the romance to the soul and heart...glad you took time to read. Thanks for your comment and it is well appreciated. |
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Beautiful Robert
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Beautiful Robert Thanks Denice...I appreciate that. |
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Edited by
Noden
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Mon 12/17/07 02:07 PM
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uhemm, nice Robert, loved it....
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uhemm, nice Robert, loved it.... Thank you Ali...I'm surprised you didn't say it in French. |
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so romantic |
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so romantic Thank you sweetheart...lots of love to you. |
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I am here my love
Holding tightly to your key. I am trying to get to you I wish it were instantly. Your soul is safe with mine and they are as happy as can be. They have mended their broken hearts and have promised to never part. My lips are pursed and soft,just right for kissing, never again will I ever come up missing. So here I am my love your other half indeed Wanting you,,loving you, because it is You that I need. |
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I am here my love Holding tightly to your key. I am trying to get to you I wish it were instantly. Your soul is safe with mine and they are as happy as can be. They have mended their broken hearts and have promised to never part. My lips are pursed and soft,just right for kissing, never again will I ever come up missing. So here I am my love your other half indeed Wanting you,,loving you, because it is You that I need. You make me so happy with your replies sweetheart...I love it...and two halves make a whole...we will always be one. |
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in your souls she lives, breathes and takes flight,,,
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh beautiful |
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in your souls she lives, breathes and takes flight,,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh beautiful Thanks Denise...and yes she does....and she is quite beautiful... |
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I am here my love Holding tightly to your key. I am trying to get to you I wish it were instantly. Your soul is safe with mine and they are as happy as can be. They have mended their broken hearts and have promised to never part. My lips are pursed and soft,just right for kissing, never again will I ever come up missing. So here I am my love your other half indeed Wanting you,,loving you, because it is You that I need. What a beautiful compliment you are to each other Beautiful, romantic and tender piece Robert |
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Robert...
I am so happy for the both of you, that you complete one another.... |
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I am here my love Holding tightly to your key. I am trying to get to you I wish it were instantly. Your soul is safe with mine and they are as happy as can be. They have mended their broken hearts and have promised to never part. My lips are pursed and soft,just right for kissing, never again will I ever come up missing. So here I am my love your other half indeed Wanting you,,loving you, because it is You that I need. What a beautiful compliment you are to each other Beautiful, romantic and tender piece Robert Thank you Jayne...I appreciate that sweet comment. |
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