BUTTERFLY KISSES

THE COOL CRISP AIR IS BLOWING
THRU HER HAIR AS SHE SITS
A TRAIN PASSING IN THE BACK GROUND
AS A TEAR FROM HER EYE DRIPS

THE GROUND IS COOL AND DAMP
THE LEAVES BLOWING ALL AROUND
SHE THINKS BACK TO THE DAYS
WHEN HER LIFE WAS SAFE AND SOUND

ONE YEAR AGO THE WORST OCCURED
SHE DIDNT KNOW HOW TO COPE
HER BEST FRIEND LEFT HER ALL ALONE
AND LEFT HER WITH NO HOPE

HE TREATED HER LIKE A PRINCESS
AND SHOWED HER SO MUCH LOVE
SHE WAS ALWAYS HIS LIL' GIRL
BUT NOW HE REST UP ABOVE

HER LIFE HASNT BEEN EASY
WITHOUT HIM BY HER SIDE
BUT SHE HAS MANAGED TO COPE
THRU ALL THE TEARS SHE HAS CRIED

SHE THINKS BACK TO THE MEMORIES
TOGETHER THEY HAVE SHARED'
NEVER HAVING TO DOUBT
HOW MUCH FOR HER HE CARED

AND AS SHE LOOKS UP

THE COOL BREEZE BLOWS THRU HER HAIR
A TEAR DROP FALLS FROM HER EYE
SHE PUTS HIS HAND AGAINST HIS GRAVE
AND SADLY STARTS TO CRY

THEN SUDDENLY.......

THESUN WAS PEAKING THRU THE CLOUDS

AS A BUTTERFLY LANDS ON HER KNEE
SHE THROWS HIM A KISS WITH A SMILE AND SAYS
I KNOW YOUR HERE WITH ME

THE BOND THEY SHARE IS UNBREAKABLE
EVEN THOUGH THEY ARE APART
SHE KEEPS HIS MEMORY ALIVE AND WELL
FROM A SPOT DEEP IN HER HEART

BEFORE SHE LEAVES HIS GRAVE
SHE LOOKS UP TO THE SKY
WHISPER'S ....DADDY I LOVE YOU
AND UNTIL NEXT TIME ......GOODBYE
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Wow, for a first poem there is lots of feeling. Very good, but what do I
know?

G

Not bad at all, has feeling but a bit shalow but yet there is a sence of
selfpity which I feel is connected to the writer.

That was a bit harsh don't you think. I thought it was pretty good for
the first time. Ignore him he's cranky today,LOL guess you didn't get
any last night huh darling

If this was the first of thoughts to try and be
then I say to you from my heart, that more we have to see!

good thoughts from life to hear and see,
to post as the poet, that you might be!

Have fun!!!

Very touching. I good job indeed. I got some last night so i am not
cranky...lol.

COULD BE BETTER, MAYBE U SHOULD WRITE ABOUT SOMETHING HAPPY

I have been writing poems, all my life, almost, and this is a beautiful
piece of art work! Keep up the great work and write some more! This poem
has very deep feelings and draws the reader into it...GREAT WORK!

I haven't had any in a long time and I'm not cranky

G

THIS IS A GOOD READ,,,SHOULD'VE BEEN TH CONTESTS..........M.

This is pretty good. And about the one said to write something
happy....who said that a poem should always be about happiness? A poem
is the expression of one’s feeling and thoughts, whether happy, sad or
angry.

Keep the good work and keep on writing!

well said NYCgirl,,,well said.......M.

well said NYCgirl,,,well said.......M.