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mentioning u get laid off once a yr.not enough pics
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Edited by
bryguy1972
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Sat 12/15/07 01:30 PM
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hey im looking 4 some advice on how 2 better my profile so that i may get ladies intererted. I need all the help i can get McGruff1, in all honesty I would revamp your entire profile. Like someone else mentioned before me, it comes across as being very negative, low self esteem, run on sentences, punctuation errors, misspells and doesn't say much about who you really are. My two cents? Here is a list: 1. Add additional pics. Take one of you without your hat and glasses and smile in each and every picture. Get one of yourself with some friends. Get another with you doing something you are very passionate about (cars, horses, welding, etc.) Have one where you can see your entire body. Have about four photos but no more than six. And for heaven sakes, no shirtless shots with you flexing your muscles. 2. Like you said, type your profile in a Word document. Type out a rough draft and then analyze it. Would you find the profile interesting if you were someone else? 3. Use humor. 4. Don't ever put "I don't want games, or a liar or a cheater". That is a given. Nobody wants that so why even included it. 5. Don't say you are a low man on the company ladder and you get laid off every year. That is no one's business. I think that about covers it for me. If anyone else wants to add their two cents, feel free. Please do not take my advise as an insult to your profile. You asked for advice and that is what I have given. By no means do I consider myself an expert but I have seen so many profiles where people are too afraid to let themselves shine. |
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hey im looking 4 some advice on how 2 better my profile so that i may get ladies intererted. I need all the help i can get McGruff1, in all honesty I would revamp your entire profile. Like someone else mentioned before me, it comes across as being very negative, low self esteem, run on sentences, punctuation errors, misspells and doesn't say much about who you really are. My two cents? Here is a list: 1. Add additional pics. Take one of you without your hat and glasses and smile in each and every picture. Get one of yourself with some friends. Get another with you doing something you are very passionate about (cars, horses, welding, etc.) Have one where you can see your entire body. Have about four photos but no more than six. And for heaven sakes, no shirtless shots with you flexing your muscles. 2. Like you said, type your profile in a Word document. Type out a rough draft and then analyze it. Would you find the profile interesting if you were someone else? 3. Use humor. 4. Don't ever put "I don't want games, or a liar or a cheater". That is a given. Nobody wants that so why even included it. 5. Don't say you are a low man on the company ladder and you get laid off every year. That is no one's business. I think that about covers it for me. If anyone else wants to add their two cents, feel free. Please do not take my advise as an insult to your profile. You asked for advice and that is what I have given. By no means do I consider myself an expert but I have seen so many profiles where people are too afraid to let themselves shine. Applause...very well stated....   
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LOL Damn Melissa, what the hell is in your coffee???
And why aren't you sharing with some other Ladies who need a bit of spark, sass, backbone and other misc. shyt needed.... you remind me of someone and just missing her posts LOL  So here's to more ball breaking posts...
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your profile:
...I am have been told that I am to nice of a guy, and well I am but I have been getting dumped on alot as they say the nice guys finish last... why ask for advice when you havent followed up on the advice already given? |
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