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technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2639	Tue 08/27/19 04:13 AM
Blacktop iridescent shimmer, toothless rubber won't bite. Arctic ice, like quartz to cold steel blades. Figuring 8, graceless motion carving infinity. Vultures of justice, circling tread deficient soles crossing slippery floors. Ledge hanging future's fall, in the grips of greased palms.

ivegotthegirth Joined Fri 08/17/18 Posts: 6666	Tue 08/27/19 08:25 PM
Very good, IMO!

ragin' cajun Joined Wed 07/10/19 Posts: 550	Tue 08/27/19 08:31 PM
Very good, IMO! very deep lovely

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2639	Wed 08/28/19 04:12 AM
Very good, IMO! I thank you for your generously favorable opinion.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2639	Wed 08/28/19 05:03 PM
Very good, IMO! very deep lovely I appreciate you reading it and sharing your thoughts.

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