Topic: BEDTIME PRAYER FOR YOUNGISH PERSONS
keithpl2's photo
Fri 01/04/19 06:58 AM

”Thank you Fate for my day during which I was not

kissed by an aunt
wooed by a 'scientologist'
whacked by a car
blackmailed by a beggar
slammed by a pavement
stalked by a hawker
prodded by a doctor
nauseated by “muzak”
stabbed by a tooth
snared by dog-poop
enraged by neighbours
unhinged by snoring
and.....
sleepless."

technovative's photo
Sun 01/06/19 05:26 AM
I enjoyed reading this one, Keith.

Daisy's photo
Mon 01/07/19 04:03 AM


”Thank you Fate for my day during which I was not

kissed by an aunt
wooed by a 'scientologist'
whacked by a car
blackmailed by a beggar
slammed by a pavement
stalked by a hawker
prodded by a doctor
nauseated by “muzak”
stabbed by a tooth
snared by dog-poop
enraged by neighbours
unhinged by snoring
and.....
sleepless."


Nice poem.

Palghat's photo
Tue 01/08/19 09:01 AM

and sleepless


And sleepless
Listening to the crickets
messages blocked by age bar
dropped my profile age from 80 to 60
"conscious" wont allow me any far
dreamless ...

no photo
Fri 01/11/19 06:13 AM
Very nice thank you for sharing

gravitational77's photo
Fri 01/11/19 04:05 PM
crickets are annoying...but cute

keithpl2's photo
Sat 01/12/19 12:47 PM
Thank you Daisy.

keithpl2's photo
Sat 01/12/19 12:48 PM
Good to hear from you.
Thanks.
k

keithpl2's photo
Sat 01/12/19 12:49 PM
a bit beyond me I'm afraid.

keithpl2's photo
Sat 01/12/19 12:50 PM
Thank you for reading it.
k

mysticalview21's photo
Sun 01/13/19 07:40 AM
Edited by mysticalview21 on Sun 01/13/19 07:41 AM
That is a interesting prayer for youngsters ...

cute :>)

keithpl2's photo
Sun 01/13/19 12:34 PM
I think quite a few can do with one, don't you!
Thank you.
k

keithpl2's photo
Mon 01/14/19 07:05 AM
p.s.

That's good gutsy sassy stuff from you on site. (Though the language is mostly new to me!).

Keep a'slugging.

k

no photo
Mon 01/14/19 07:33 AM
Johnnys in the basement,
Mixing up the medicine

Kinda reminded me of Subterranean homesick blues