Topic: BEDTIME PRAYER FOR YOUNGISH PERSONS | |
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”Thank you Fate for my day during which I was not kissed by an aunt wooed by a 'scientologist' whacked by a car blackmailed by a beggar slammed by a pavement stalked by a hawker prodded by a doctor nauseated by “muzak” stabbed by a tooth snared by dog-poop enraged by neighbours unhinged by snoring and..... sleepless." |
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I enjoyed reading this one, Keith.
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”Thank you Fate for my day during which I was not kissed by an aunt wooed by a 'scientologist' whacked by a car blackmailed by a beggar slammed by a pavement stalked by a hawker prodded by a doctor nauseated by “muzak” stabbed by a tooth snared by dog-poop enraged by neighbours unhinged by snoring and..... sleepless." Nice poem. |
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and sleepless And sleepless Listening to the crickets messages blocked by age bar dropped my profile age from 80 to 60 "conscious" wont allow me any far dreamless ... |
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Very nice thank you for sharing
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crickets are annoying...but cute
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Thank you Daisy.
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Good to hear from you.
Thanks. k |
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a bit beyond me I'm afraid.
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Thank you for reading it.
k |
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Edited by
mysticalview21
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Sun 01/13/19 07:41 AM
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That is a interesting prayer for youngsters ...
cute :>) |
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I think quite a few can do with one, don't you!
Thank you. k |
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p.s.
That's good gutsy sassy stuff from you on site. (Though the language is mostly new to me!). Keep a'slugging. k |
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Johnnys in the basement,
Mixing up the medicine Kinda reminded me of Subterranean homesick blues |
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