you may think ontario
is just billy ocean by a boat
and sometimes we wanna say please
just dive in
but what would we be without a
critic taking his vote
we'd all be just writers..writing
for nothing

cause if you dont want to be judged
then no one takes your work seriously
you'll get a bunch of huh's and whats
in a thread posted by me

Jimi lives and dies by the pen,
a true artist of his time
and man theres nothing you cant give
where he cant drop a rhyme
from justsayhi to soulsgate,he is
always by our side
giving praise and compliments to everything
we write


cause you can talk to him about anything
sex,shit..he doesnt care
just as long as you're true to him,he will
always be there


Claire I really dont know so well,so
what the hell can I say
One thing I know for sure is that you
have an eye for poetray (sorry...bump)



Our judges have been fair and just
so we sing these words to you
Thank god theres love in this world
and how the hell did ? ever make it through



laugh your ass off guys/thats my intentions
and thank you for being good sports through this

Very good words, to complement these viewers notes.
And it will let everyone feel phrase for casting in their votes.
Another poem', 'another rhyme,' cheers heard from the crowd.
Everyone has their own little style, some soft, and some laud.
Pay heed to all who have a need,
For a pat on the back for your knack.
And put your hand in mine, squeze it tight
You all know twas a hell-of-a-fight.
Take your bow's and take your minds
And start another war of your rhymes.





peace, love, and be real.

Very cute you guys...
Thanks for the smile...