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Jasmine
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Sun 11/18/18 02:02 AM
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We both are dreamers,
But walking different paths, We both want same things, Yet these things don't last.. The things we want, Love,care and affection, Yet too proud to admit, We both have a connection.. Why we hesitating to reach out, Keeping quiet no talking, Just thinking about each other, And online stalking.. Where is the passion and intensity, I saw in your eyes, And felt in your words, Was it for real, Or was it just a dream I had? Will this waiting end? And will this romance flourish, Will you fill my life, With fragrance and color, Or will this romance just fade away, And become a forgotten path of summer.. |
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[using a line for a haiku<<<hope its OK)
I saw in your eyes What your mouth refused to say Would you like some tea? |
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[using a line for a haiku<<<hope its OK) I saw in your eyes What your mouth refused to say Would you like some tea? Not familiar with haiku but nice |
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haiku is a poem form with a syllable count 5-7-5.
Traditional haiku is pretty formal, modern western haiku that I do is not.But we try to tie the lines together. Am looking to start my own Haiku thread where the last line of the poem already writ, (5 syllables) is the first line of the next (also 5 syllables), making a chain of poetry in haiku form. I'm new here so thought I'd start with established poets here and use some of their lines. Thanks for your support! |
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We both are dreamers, But walking different paths, We both want same things, Yet these things don't last.. The things we want, Love,care and affection, Yet too proud to admit, We both have a connection.. Why we hesitating to reach out, Keeping quiet no talking, Just thinking about each other, And online stalking.. Where is the passion and intensity, I saw in your eyes, And felt in your words, Was it for real, Or was it just a dream I had? Will this waiting end? And will this romance flourish, Will you fill my life, With fragrance and color, Or will this romance just fade away, And become a forgotten path of summer.. Another lovely poem, Neelamz. |
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We both are dreamers, But walking different paths, We both want same things, Yet these things don't last.. The things we want, Love,care and affection, Yet too proud to admit, We both have a connection.. Why we hesitating to reach out, Keeping quiet no talking, Just thinking about each other, And online stalking.. Where is the passion and intensity, I saw in your eyes, And felt in your words, Was it for real, Or was it just a dream I had? Will this waiting end? And will this romance flourish, Will you fill my life, With fragrance and color, Or will this romance just fade away, And become a forgotten path of summer.. Another lovely poem, Neelamz. Thank you |
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Very lovely
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Very lovely Thank you |
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