Topic: My Poem Called "Taken In" | |
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I Was Taken In, By Your Beauty And Finesse
I Hoped We Would Click By Our Similar Ticks, One Would Guess. The Talks We Had, The Laughs and Smiles We Shared One Would Think We Had Distinct Eyes.....And At Each Other We Stared. The Heavy Conversation To The Point Of No End We Figure There Isn’t Quite Enough Time For Us To Spend. Thinking Of Each Other Day In And Out Wondering If The Time Was Wasted, Wondering What Thoughts Were About. I Was Taken In And Thought Things Were Great I Didn’t Know It Would Come Down To A Debate. When I Saw You Changed Your Will And Still You Lesson You Conversation Day By Day You Tell Me Words That Hurt Inside And My Heart Feels Decay. You May Think The Words Are Right But Try To Hide It All I Was Taken In.....And My Entire Being Was Led To The Fall...... -Dedicated To A Special Someone..... |
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i know this feeling well..WILL
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Thanks Will. This is my first ever poem and really put my heart into
it!! It meant a lot to me. She'll never see it but, I had to let it out somehow cause I'll be damned if I'm going to sit here and feel sorry for myself...... Thanks again Will for YOUR kind words.... |
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good answer...
*grass hopper* |
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but how do you know she has not seen it,just not saying???
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*Grass Hoppers*
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That's the chance I'll have to take brother....that's the chance I'll
have to take.... |
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