Topic: My Poem Called "Taken In"
trying_to_fly's photo
Thu 11/16/06 12:02 AM
I Was Taken In, By Your Beauty And Finesse
I Hoped We Would Click By Our Similar Ticks, One Would Guess.
The Talks We Had, The Laughs and Smiles We Shared
One Would Think We Had Distinct Eyes.....And At Each Other We
Stared.
The Heavy Conversation To The Point Of No End
We Figure There Isn’t Quite Enough Time For Us To Spend.
Thinking Of Each Other Day In And Out
Wondering If The Time Was Wasted, Wondering What Thoughts Were
About.
I Was Taken In And Thought Things Were Great
I Didn’t Know It Would Come Down To A Debate.
When I Saw You Changed Your Will And Still You Lesson You Conversation
Day By Day
You Tell Me Words That Hurt Inside And My Heart Feels Decay.
You May Think The Words Are Right But Try To Hide It All
I Was Taken In.....And My Entire Being Was Led To The Fall......

-Dedicated To A Special Someone.....

no photo
Thu 11/16/06 04:49 AM
i know this feeling well..WILL

trying_to_fly's photo
Thu 11/16/06 11:02 AM
Thanks Will. This is my first ever poem and really put my heart into
it!! It meant a lot to me. She'll never see it but, I had to let it
out somehow cause I'll be damned if I'm going to sit here and feel sorry
for myself...... Thanks again Will for YOUR kind words....

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/16/06 11:18 AM
good answer...


*grass hopper*

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/16/06 11:20 AM
but how do you know she has not seen it,just not saying???

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/16/06 11:21 AM
*Grass Hoppers*

trying_to_fly's photo
Thu 11/16/06 11:31 AM
That's the chance I'll have to take brother....that's the chance I'll
have to take....