I do not mind positive criticism and I am open to whatever adjustments you think may be helpful

the third part. the negative one. loose it and do something else.
it' is not going to slow any of those wackjob types down, in the least, and it is a turn off to the true seekers.
other than that, nicely done

I agree with Eric about getting rid of the negative paragraph.

Also in your general description you have "no answer" in a few sections. Most men will want to know if you smoke or drink so it would be good to answer those.

The rest looks good!

Okay. Can you give me a clue on what negative paragraph you are referring to???

Sure Maria, paragraph #3 where you have all the "if you're this, the go away" kind of statements.

Make it more cheerful. You can change it to what you're looking for instead by turning all the negatives into positives.... Such as "I'm looking for a Christian man who's strong in his faith".

The way it is now is more of a turn off like Eric said. When people, guys and gals, see a bunch of "if you're this, then you're not for me" they have a tendency to turn the other way or wonder what else you don't like...

Hope that helps

thanks River and Eric... good advice there. Should I get rid of my "I am not an Asian" Comments as well? I don't know how many Asans have hit on me since I've been here. Wow!

When you're creating your profile, it's best to create it to attract the ones you want to attract. Never mind about the other ones, a lot of them don't even read your profile, they're just wanting something other than what you're looking for.

With that said... do you think you should change it?

You're welcome

Good advice given from Eric and River, Maria. The negativity can be a turn off for some guys but you can say the same meanings just say it in a different way. For example, instead of saying.....(If you are not Christian then you have the wrong lady.) you could say "I am a Christian Lady looking for the same in a man." That says the same thing but it is not negative like before. Good luck to you Maria...

Ooooooo okay.

Good job.

Much better Maria