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Ok I'm either going to start writing a script or a short story and I want the first line to say this........"Have you ever had one of those moments that just snaps you back to reality?"
Would that be a good line to start with? |
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Once upon a time....long ago....................
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All the time, life always tells us something, if we are open to receiving it.
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That's a great opening line. As an avid reader, the catchier the opening line is, the more likely a person will want to read on.
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"i tried to pick up on a hot chick and got turned down"
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Edited by
Jistme
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Fri 12/07/07 07:14 AM
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As an avid reader, the catchier the opening line is, the more likely a person will want to read on. Well.. If that's the case.. then maybe you should borrow this one: "The Axe Boy lived downstairs." Or this one is an oldie but goodie: "In the beginning, God created the heavens and the earth." |
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As a writer myself, I would call it a bit cliched. So it depends on the effect you're trying to convey.
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