Topic: proposal
lookhere46's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:31 PM
The stars are shimmering and it makes me feel so fine.
The warmth of your hand touching mine.
I tighten your scarf as your cheeks go so blush.
Your warmth and your smile just gives me a rush.
I slowly wipe the frost that grows on your brow.
The night is getting colder and colder somehow.
Its a night like no other just holding you tight.
As the moons shines above us giving us light.
I reach for the ring in my pocket and go down on one knee.
Your the woman that I love will you marry me.

no photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:33 PM
yes..... i will now, when are we getting a divorce? i have to plan my next wedding

FaithfulOne78's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:34 PM
Wow!

songstress1's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:35 PM
made me sigh,...flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:35 PM
REALY NICE!!:smile:

iceprincess's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:37 PM
that was really pretty

lookhere46's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:37 PM
thanks all , i have been writing music and hope to publish someday

LAMom's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:37 PM
flowerforyou very nice

lookhere46's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:38 PM
thanks alot

coco56's photo
Thu 12/06/07 07:39 PM
nice poem , so sweet bigsmile