Topic: Footsteps
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Tue 08/21/18 02:32 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Tue 08/21/18 02:55 PM
How you walked into my heart?
Very quietly without making a sound,
There wasn't a shadow anywhere,
And no footsteps on the ground..

Still I kept you close in my heart,
Like da precious jewel you are,
I kept hoping we would meet someday,
In da meantime loving you from afar..

But you kept your secrets,
Wanted me to read your mind,
You didn't say what you felt,
And we pretended everything was fine..

Then things went wrong,
We felt we had enough,
Couldn't we have tried abit more,
Without so easily giving up?

I am trying now to find a way,
To your heart,
To win you back,
But how do I reach you?
There is no shadow,
And you didn't leave any footsteps..

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Tue 08/21/18 03:24 PM
Lovely poem, Neelamz
thank you for sharing

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Tue 08/21/18 03:31 PM

Lovely poem, Neelamz
thank you for sharing


Thank you dear ☺

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Fri 08/24/18 03:25 PM
Hey neelam, cute one like you

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Sat 08/25/18 05:19 PM

Hey neelam, cute one like you


Thank you smile2

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Wed 08/29/18 08:53 AM

How you walked into my heart?
Very quietly without making a sound,
There wasn't a shadow anywhere,
And no footsteps on the ground..

Still I kept you close in my heart,
Like da precious jewel you are,
I kept hoping we would meet someday,
In da meantime loving you from afar..

But you kept your secrets,
Wanted me to read your mind,
You didn't say what you felt,
And we pretended everything was fine..

Then things went wrong,
We felt we had enough,
Couldn't we have tried abit more,
Without so easily giving up?

I am trying now to find a way,
To your heart,
To win you back,
But how do I reach you?
There is no shadow,
And you didn't leave any footsteps..


Nice poem Neelam :thumbsup:

"Life is queer with its twists and turns, 
As every one of us sometimes learns, 
And many a failure turns about, 
When he might have won had he stuck it out; 
Don't give up though the pace seems slow-- 
You may succeed with another blow."
smile2

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Wed 08/29/18 12:32 PM


How you walked into my heart?
Very quietly without making a sound,
There wasn't a shadow anywhere,
And no footsteps on the ground..

Still I kept you close in my heart,
Like da precious jewel you are,
I kept hoping we would meet someday,
In da meantime loving you from afar..

But you kept your secrets,
Wanted me to read your mind,
You didn't say what you felt,
And we pretended everything was fine..

Then things went wrong,
We felt we had enough,
Couldn't we have tried abit more,
Without so easily giving up?

I am trying now to find a way,
To your heart,
To win you back,
But how do I reach you?
There is no shadow,
And you didn't leave any footsteps..


Nice poem Neelam :thumbsup:

"Life is queer with its twists and turns, 
As every one of us sometimes learns, 
And many a failure turns about, 
When he might have won had he stuck it out; 
Don't give up though the pace seems slow-- 
You may succeed with another blow."
smile2


Thank you
You write well too smile2