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Topic: Close my eyes
Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Tue 01/16/18 01:43 AM
I saw you when the lightening touched earth. The night sky was thunder, I heard your voice in your eyes. And it was love. Sands trickling, teasing my hourglass figure! And you my magnet.. My same, my opposite Come to soothe me with the kisses from deep calling unto deep.

scepticalsoulmate Joined Wed 08/24/16 Posts: 9737	Tue 01/16/18 04:17 AM
beautiful

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2636	Tue 01/16/18 06:38 PM
Words with the capacity to deliver an energetic charge.

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Tue 01/16/18 06:42 PM
beautiful, like you.

Integrityis1st Joined Sun 07/24/16 Posts: 9956	Tue 01/16/18 07:03 PM
I saw what you did there. Cleverly charged And you can't see the stars without the dark Whether you have rung your bell or it is night time. Thanks for sharing

Familylooking2982764 Joined Sun 01/07/18 Posts: 9	Tue 01/16/18 09:13 PM
Not bad..love is a wonderful thing..hope it all worked out for you

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Mon 01/22/18 11:30 AM
beautiful Thank you

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Mon 01/22/18 11:32 AM
Words with the capacity to deliver an energetic charge. Recharge :) x

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Mon 01/22/18 11:34 AM
beautiful, like you.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Mon 01/22/18 11:35 AM
I saw what you did there. Cleverly charged And you can't see the stars without the dark Whether you have rung your bell or it is night time. Thanks for sharing Ha ha, my eyes are closed, as in the heading.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Mon 01/22/18 11:36 AM Edited by Ladywind7 on Mon 01/22/18 11:37 AM
Not bad..love is a wonderful thing..hope it all worked out for you Love reciprocated is indeed a wonderful thing. Thanks.

Pepinofruit Joined Sun 08/18/13 Posts: 658	Wed 01/24/18 04:57 AM Edited by Pepinofruit on Wed 01/24/18 05:00 AM
To the one and only. The most beautiful Dutch girl, with whom I fell in love back in 1979 in the Kibbutz. I feel a warmth around me, like your presence is so near. And I close my eyes to visualize your face when you were here. I endure the times we spent together, and they are locked inside my heart. As long as I have those memories we will never be apart. Even though we cannot speak anymore, my voice is always there, because every night before I sleep, I have you in my prayer. B.T.W....I don't live in the past, just with beatiful memories.

scepticalsoulmate Joined Wed 08/24/16 Posts: 9737	Wed 01/24/18 05:55 AM
To the one and only. The most beautiful Dutch girl, with whom I fell in love back in 1979 in the Kibbutz. I feel a warmth around me, like your presence is so near. And I close my eyes to visualize your face when you were here. I endure the times we spent together, and they are locked inside my heart. As long as I have those memories we will never be apart. Even though we cannot speak anymore, my voice is always there, because every night before I sleep, I have you in my prayer. B.T.W....I don't live in the past, just with beatiful memories. Nice poem Pepi she’s one lucky girl there

Pepinofruit Joined Sun 08/18/13 Posts: 658	Wed 01/24/18 08:36 PM Edited by Pepinofruit on Wed 01/24/18 08:42 PM
To the one and only. The most beautiful Dutch girl, with whom I fell in love back in 1979 in the Kibbutz. I feel a warmth around me, like your presence is so near. And I close my eyes to visualize your face when you were here. I endure the times we spent together, and they are locked inside my heart. As long as I have those memories we will never be apart. Even though we cannot speak anymore, my voice is always there, because every night before I sleep, I have you in my prayer. B.T.W....I don't live in the past, just with beatiful memories. Nice poem Pepi she’s one lucky girl there ********************************************* Well THANKYOU "scepticalsoulmate" She was/is still in my mind and always. How wonderful it feels to have loved for real She was a real & genuine princess also. ...My only chosen one 4 life so far LOVE YOU ALWAYS HEATHER I only have opened my book of life for a bit

scepticalsoulmate Joined Wed 08/24/16 Posts: 9737	Thu 01/25/18 04:57 PM
Truly inspiring Pepi. there’s hope for all of us yet. A love that is always

Pepinofruit Joined Sun 08/18/13 Posts: 658	Thu 01/25/18 06:11 PM
Truly inspiring Pepi. there’s hope for all of us yet. A love that is always **********************************

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Thu 01/25/18 06:50 PM
To the one and only. The most beautiful Dutch girl, with whom I fell in love back in 1979 in the Kibbutz. I feel a warmth around me, like your presence is so near. And I close my eyes to visualize your face when you were here. I endure the times we spent together, and they are locked inside my heart. As long as I have those memories we will never be apart. Even though we cannot speak anymore, my voice is always there, because every night before I sleep, I have you in my prayer. B.T.W....I don't live in the past, just with beatiful memories. This is beautiful Sir.

Robxbox73 Joined Sun 12/27/15 Posts: 5302	Thu 01/25/18 09:34 PM
LadyWind... Very alluring... Thank you! ;^)

qadeer96 Joined Thu 01/25/18 Posts: 1	Thu 01/25/18 09:35 PM
beautiful

Pepinofruit Joined Sun 08/18/13 Posts: 658	Fri 01/26/18 12:30 AM
To the one and only. The most beautiful Dutch girl, with whom I fell in love back in 1979 in the Kibbutz. I feel a warmth around me, like your presence is so near. And I close my eyes to visualize your face when you were here. I endure the times we spent together, and they are locked inside my heart. As long as I have those memories we will never be apart. Even though we cannot speak anymore, my voice is always there, because every night before I sleep, I have you in my prayer. B.T.W....I don't live in the past, just with beatiful memories. This is beautiful Sir. ************************************************** Well thank you "lu_rose" I am certain I told you, call me anything but SIR ! Nice to hear from you