Topic: Fragments...
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Mon 11/13/06 07:38 AM
Like a fool
i sit and wait for you
in the rain, storm clouds brewing
thunder rolls in the distance
over the hills, I feel you laughing
temper stewing waiting for you
my heart on my sleeve taking chance
still waiting for you
raining harder,
I feel the lightning through my heart
my weakness is your strength
nothing do i have to gain
sitting here thinking,
wondering, if this is all a game
I am soaked now, to the bone
chilled and alone
clouds growing larger
droplets washing over me now
sitting in the rain...
sadness sweeping over me
darkness creeping in

BlackWidow8511's photo
Mon 11/13/06 07:42 AM
Exactly how I feel all the time!
Great poem
I love it!

michael1313's photo
Mon 11/13/06 08:06 AM
you my child,do we keep,
as angels, for you do we weap,
this rain will pass,
as your pain will pass,
we will warm your lonely heart,
for True You we do see,from the start,
'tis Truth we see in your loving heart,
so come under my cloak,love is not a joke,
and feel our warm wings flow,
for then,and only then,you will know,
how our wings beat for you so slow,
we hold you in our loving arms rest,
please hold us too,this is your test,
patience for thee,for love to pass at best,
Dry your eyes,and your heart,feel my breast,
love in me,as you love we,we are true celeste,
fly with me,try with me,fill this sky with we,
and you will truely pass this test for me...*angel* lonely soul

no photo
Mon 11/13/06 08:21 AM
I must drive fast through this rain tonight
my love awaits, must reach home, by mornings light
no phone, no time, I can't see the road ahead of me
but wait, oh know', headlights on the wrong side
coming at me, the brakes, the sound, the pain inside
my time is here, but she's not near,
I think goodbye, can't move at all,I pray to God,and in his name
please let her know my love inside, so my life was not in vain.





Why I could not be there!

no photo
Mon 11/13/06 12:39 PM
SCG....wow gurl that was deep I could feel the anger, pain and waiting

Iam.....that made me cry... very real!!