Topic: alone
TiraLys's photo
Wed 11/28/07 12:34 AM
As I stand here alone in exile,
I watch the people as they pass by me.
They laugh, talk, yell, and cry,
Amongst themselves, in front of me.
They act as if I don’t even exist.

Some people stare at me,
Yet they don’t even notice me.
I’m always there standing, waiting, watching,
For someone to take notice of my beauty.

All my life I’ve endured so much,
From one extreme to the next.
From the burning heat of the summer.
To the freezing snow of the winter.
And when the snow melts,
And the first raindrops come.
It reminds me that another year has passed,
Another year of loneliness.

You see, some people came one day,
They said that they would save me,
Save me from an awful fate.
Instead of saving me,
They have condemned me,
Condemned me to a life of loneliness and despair.

For I cannot cry, scream, or shout,
All I can do is stand here alone.
Waiting, watching,
For someone to take notice of me.
For I am the mighty oak,
Standing ever so vigilant in solitude upon this hill.

LAMom's photo
Wed 11/28/07 12:37 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhh Wow,,, I'm at a loss for words,,, so incredible


Welcome to JSH,, hope to see more of your soul,,, flowerforyou

TiraLys's photo
Wed 11/28/07 12:47 AM
thank you for the warm welcome LAMom:smile:

wonderfulone's photo
Wed 11/28/07 01:16 AM
:wink: Cheer up, I've been through some things in my life. My motto is roll with the punch'es. Look up my profile on MySPace under Silverbackg419@aol.com, and it will explain me to you. Otherwise hang in there, times and situations will get better.

no photo
Wed 11/28/07 02:27 AM
good reading--

Noden's photo
Wed 11/28/07 04:58 AM
We all feel the pain of loniness and despair, I too have had it for so long now, but here you can spread your roots, to get a footing, you'll find what your looking for, or it may just come to you.

Keep writing, and so happy you found JSH, it's been my blessing, with many friends to come, welcome to JSH, jump into the forums and post your little heart out....post whatever comes to mind and soon some friends you'll come to find...

I loved your poem, very deep and emotional...looking forward to more
as that's how we get to know your soul.

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