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JaUkNz
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We, the world, our cultures, our faiths
Our social experiences that influences and shapes Our rhymes, and our themes, all our rules and our states, That bends clear realities into tools that creates Disfigured perceptions, and demons, and hates And moves us like animals into pacts, and negates All reasons and motives to love all and feel free In minds, and in hearts, and in politics, and in dreams. Diversity is beauty, perfections in myriad forms Difference is courage to be one among all Melanomas that shade range from ebony to white And strands grow in all textures is irrelevant and trite Eyes that look through the many mirrors of light Shapes of all beings clothed in garbs that delights Feet that walk roads on their own unique sites Collecting their stories, a pilgrims insight Those birth threads that feed us all utopic cake Is whole, and complete and able to maintain Yet chips of its goodness crumble and dissipate During mountainous obstacles of life whiles it bakes In ovens of childhood, and youth-filled heartaches, Then the adult realization that the whole world is fake The midlife rethinking assessing, rejuvenates The part of our being that burned by mistake The collection of stories are rare and concise We recognize it’s repeated in so many lives We find that these histories make us realize There is no real difference from one another in life, Just fears and some nonsense that taught us to wane And move from the platform that make us all same. Claudia Thomas Barber (May 2017) |
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Edited by
JaUkNz
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Sat 05/27/17 06:44 PM
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There is an error
"Melanomas that shade range from ebony to white" darn corrective, of course I meant the pigment, not the cancer lol. It's meant to say "Melanin that shades range from ebony to white" It will not let me edit the original for some reason. We, the world, our cultures, our faiths Our social experiences that influences and shapes Our rhymes, and our themes, all our rules and our states, That bends clear realities into tools that creates Disfigured perceptions, and demons, and hates And moves us like animals into pacts, and negates All reasons and motives to love all and feel free In minds, and in hearts, and in politics, and in dreams. Diversity is beauty, perfections in myriad forms Difference is courage to be one among all Melanin that shades range from ebony to white And strands grow in all textures is irrelevant and trite Eyes that look through the many mirrors of light Shapes of all beings clothed in garbs that delights Feet that walk roads on their own unique sites Collecting their stories, a pilgrims insight Those birth threads that feed us all utopic cake Is whole, and complete and able to maintain Yet chips of its goodness crumble and dissipate During mountainous obstacles of life whiles it bakes In ovens of childhood, and youth-filled heartaches, Then the adult realization that the whole world is fake The midlife rethinking assessing, rejuvenates The part of our being that burned by mistake The collection of stories are rare and concise We recognize it’s repeated in so many lives We find that these histories make us realize There is no real difference from one another in life, Just fears and some nonsense that taught us to wane And move from the platform that make us all same. Claudia Thomas Barber (May 2017) |
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This gond has rosined for a bit then againd there is giving that omit if when under stay gives yander stray another ment should keep my day again when light stands there is drift and that mans figure for tha end to is my hither, the bright spot is reaching to the yearther if the day shall rise as uncertain may surprise fixated within one self kindfullness just forever stays kept, then again to another's eyes to within should call out rely's until it is the finish.
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Edited by
JaUkNz
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Sat 05/27/17 07:56 PM
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An interesting perspective, some of which may be lost in translation., but I wish you all the best in life
This gond has rosined for a bit then againd there is giving that omit if when under stay gives yander stray another ment should keep my day again when light stands there is drift and that mans figure for tha end to is my hither, the bright spot is reaching to the yearther if the day shall rise as uncertain may surprise fixated within one self kindfullness just forever stays kept, then again to another's eyes to within should call out rely's until it is the finish. |
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Edited by
JaUkNz
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Sat 06/03/17 03:19 AM
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I mean coming from the UK I did not understand some of the words, It would be wonderful if you could tell me about its meaning so I could really appreciate it fully. Many thanks, This gond has rosined for a bit then againd there is giving that omit if when under stay gives yander stray another ment should keep my day again when light stands there is drift and that mans figure for tha end to is my hither, the bright spot is reaching to the yearther if the day shall rise as uncertain may surprise fixated within one self kindfullness just forever stays kept, then again to another's eyes to within should call out rely's until it is the finish. |
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great work, lovely share.
one suggestion: melanoma is a type of skin cancer... perhaps you mean melanin? quick fix... |
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