I would like to see if I could get input (pointers) on my profile and if I could maybe possible get some ratings on my pictures and the rest of my profile. Thank you.

The photo is fine. However, you should add a couple more including a full body shot. The essay is not terrible, but not all that great. Lose the last sentence and add more about the type of woman you seek.

Don't think thiscc profile is in your best interest.

Given some of the things you posted I would do a serious edit. I NEVER promote lying but there are a te and place to share some facts.

Focus on the current pluses about your life and you can kick the can around how some don't have a the maturity or experience you have later.

I think you would do better with a different lead shot. You are a good looking guy but you are not connecting and the background is distracting. Add more photos that tell some of your date worthy interests. Make it easy for someone to want to have fun with you.

That doesn't preclude someone liking that you are an entrepreneur. Or you are medically separated vet. Not sure that always computes to civilians but it sure does make the scammers lick their chops.

Good luck.

Will check back and see if your tune up is better. I will bet your results will be.








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