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Topic: Feast or Fester
technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2644	Sat 04/08/17 12:45 PM
Gnawing to the cuticle, saliva soaked nail crumbs litter grainy fields. Wind swept grasslands scrape weakened ankles, dusting off soot plumes cast-up tromping coals. Hunger gripes loudly watching wheat blow away. Festering appetite starving for bread. Gaunt- angst-ridden vagabonds careening headlong to the feast.

mzrosie Joined Wed 08/14/13 Posts: 33997	Sat 04/08/17 12:50 PM
sounds like zombie feast... So delighted to see you again, my dear friend tech Don't be a stranger now ya hear

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2644	Sat 04/08/17 01:06 PM
sounds like zombie feast... So delighted to see you again, my dear friend tech Don't be a stranger now ya hear Hey Rosie. As always, I appreciate your attention and feedback. You know it didn't occur to me that this poem might conjure images of zombies. Now that you've said it, I can see it being interpreted that way.

mzrosie Joined Wed 08/14/13 Posts: 33997	Sat 04/08/17 01:25 PM
sounds like zombie feast... So delighted to see you again, my dear friend tech Don't be a stranger now ya hear Hey Rosie. As always, I appreciate your attention and feedback. You know it didn't occur to me that this poem might conjure images of zombies. Now that you've said it, I can see it being interpreted that way. nah prolly just me It just you posted after I read a topic "How do I stop eating my skin?"

PacificStar48 Joined Tue 10/02/07 Posts: 13764	Sun 04/09/17 08:54 AM
Gnawing to the cuticle, saliva soaked nail crumbs litter grainy fields. Wind swept grasslands scrape weakened ankles, dusting off soot plumes cast-up tromping coals. Hunger gripes loudly watching wheat blow away. Festering appetite starving for bread. Gaunt- angst-ridden vagabonds careening headlong to the feast. [/quot This reminds me of an ancient description of the starving Irish tromping the fields for left grain .

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2644	Sun 04/09/17 06:07 PM
Thanks for checking it out and sharing your thoughts about it, PStar.

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