I'm new at this so I hope you like my poems.. :)

Love Ends


Into the pits of hell my soul burned! My
love, my only true love! I gave up my body,
I could no longer hold in the pain! I took
I my own life; never shall these lips feel
another. Never more, shall the blood of
hope, love and trust flow through my cold
body.

My love, lost forever in the sands of time.
The beating of my heart is all I hear. As
I forget whom my love once was! His heart
had become stone cold. His eyes were empty,
as I finally let go. I myself have turned
into a bitter stone cold creature.
My heart is only a cold burning flame, as
the last emembers die out.
SO DO I!

Hi. I am sure you will do a good job. :)

That is a good one. very nice :)

thats a good one

Unless the winds of change fan that flame.......which would be good 'cause then you'll right more. Huffing and puffing towards flame....

Lovers Death

His hands clutch my heart; he squeezes the
love out of it. I can't stand being without
him. Soft lips pressed against mine. He
tells me he loves me. Slowly those words
fade away; his hands no longer hold my
heart. I am not able to stay away, I need
his love, I need to feel his love again. I
no longer wish to feel the love of another.
Please my love, I only wish for you to be
once more! I love you! I am so sorry please
forgive me, I cannot and will not live
without you.

Sheep's Clothing

A dying love.
As the embers of my dying fire, ignite into
eternal flames! I see in the fire the face
of my angel. Always there, gentle to the
touch, and arms filled with love. In my mind
I committed mental suicide! Faces of evil,
horror fill my mind, taking control of my
soul. They try to change me into a monster,
one that isn't human! One that isn't afraid
of death, one that welcomes it.

Wow, your poems have lots of depth and feeling to them. Nice poetry!

Thank you.. I don't think they are as great as some of the ones I've read.. WOW.. :)
Thanks all :)

Thank you.. I try to put my feelings in them.. Guess that's what happens when your depressed LOL

You know I would love anything you do

HAHA.. are you stalking me? lol
Well I'm glad you love them... :)
Didn't know you were into poems...

Yes, they are deep, but very well written. Edgar Allen Poeish so to speak...very good Kitty. Keep Posting.

I don't have anymore.. that I want to post right now... LOL... I'd rather see what people think of these first LOL sorry..

Well you have the talent...so post when you can. Those are very good.

I'll try if I can...