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Topic: The Sacrifice
MiaReally Joined Sun 02/12/17 Posts: 20	Mon 02/13/17 07:17 PM
I see the pain in their eyes At how I left them wounded Bleeding, broken A damaged mess And I chose it You never required it of me Yet I chose it anyway I sacrificed them I sacrificed my children On the altar Of a Christian marriage I'm so sorry

no1phD Joined Tue 01/07/14 Posts: 27442	Mon 02/13/17 08:40 PM
Wow..that there is some deep deep stuff..wow..thanks for sharing..

BrentFL Joined Sun 02/12/17 Posts: 1028	Tue 02/14/17 09:50 AM
Very powerful.

MiaReally Joined Sun 02/12/17 Posts: 20	Tue 02/14/17 09:33 PM
Wow..that there is some deep deep stuff..wow..thanks for sharing.. Thank you. I'm really enjoying your work too. You're writings are heartfelt and well-done. I feel like a novice compared to you.

MiaReally Joined Sun 02/12/17 Posts: 20	Tue 02/14/17 09:36 PM
Very powerful. Thank you. I'm not an experienced writer so your encouragement is appreciated.

no1phD Joined Tue 01/07/14 Posts: 27442	Tue 02/14/17 10:17 PM
Wow..that there is some deep deep stuff..wow..thanks for sharing.. Thank you. I'm really enjoying your work too. You're writings are heartfelt and well-done. I feel like a novice compared to you. ..awww.. thank you for the compliment.. but honestly I just put down on the LCD.. what I'm feeling deep within me..... sometimes I have to drag it out of me kicking and screaming... but whatever the process.. All good..wink

MiaReally Joined Sun 02/12/17 Posts: 20	Wed 02/15/17 05:47 AM
Wow..that there is some deep deep stuff..wow..thanks for sharing.. Thank you. I'm really enjoying your work too. You're writings are heartfelt and well-done. I feel like a novice compared to you. ..awww.. thank you for the compliment.. but honestly I just put down on the LCD.. what I'm feeling deep within me..... sometimes I have to drag it out of me kicking and screaming... but whatever the process.. All good..wink Whatever the process, It works well. Please keep doing it and posting the results.

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