Topic: "Without You"
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Sat 11/17/07 07:29 PM
Without you!

Without you my life isn't complete.

Without you my heart skips a beat.

Without you love means nothing.

Without you my arms feel so empty.

Without you my tears never end.

Without you I'm so cold & lonely.

Without you I have many long sleepless nights.

Without you I wake up alone not being able to see your pretty face or your sweet glowing smile.

Without you a kiss has no meaning and a great emotional loss of passion.

Without you my world is so dark & gray.

Without you saying "I love you" has no feelings of affection if your not there to share them with me.

Without you holding you in my arms is extremely difficult without your warm,gentle romantic touch.

Without you the nights seem so lonely & the stars don't shine so bright they even lose their twinkle.

Without you everything around me & in my life just doesn't feel the same.

Without you I have no one who understands my problems & always finds a solution to making me happy again.

Without you I can't live a great happy life.

Without you!


Written By Me > Jesse
Date Written > October 21 2003

Hope you all enjoyed my very 1st attempt at writing a poem.
Unfourtunetly I never had great success after writing this poem.
Please leave any thoughts or comments...much appreciated.

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Sat 11/17/07 07:32 PM
Ohne Dich....lol....it's a heart felt poem, congrats

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Sat 11/17/07 07:35 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

Welcome to the Family

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Sat 11/17/07 07:35 PM
Thanks I guess I have more talent express through romantic poems or thoughts to reach all the girls out there you never had that sweet,lovable,kind,caring guy who always wanted a romantic,sensitive,straight from the heart kind of guy.
But thank you.

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Sat 11/17/07 07:45 PM
i can't say welcome to the family cause i can't write poetry....i take my friend's poetry and write guitar and drum parts to them and turn them into songs...

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Sat 11/17/07 07:47 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Josh welcome to the family,, I am not a poet I write whats in my heart whats in my mind,,, I find peace upon these pages and within I have come to find many friends and a family is what we are,,,,,


Hugs to you flowerforyou

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Sat 11/17/07 07:47 PM
Oh that's awesome.Hope you have success with that.I play drums been doing so since 10 yrs old....I taught myself.But keep it up you'll find lots of talent in you.

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Sat 11/17/07 07:49 PM
i've been playing guitar for 7 years.....i just mess around with drums when i can....i'm decent at drums

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Sat 11/17/07 08:00 PM
lets keep this on you, tho....you got talent man.....keep posting...seriously

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Sat 11/17/07 08:06 PM
I'll do my best.Thanks for the encouragement and compliments...I really appreciate it.

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Sat 11/17/07 08:21 PM
not a problem