Your eyes, they shine
Your face is fair
With moistened lips and golden hair.
A wink, a touch, a thoughtful stare.
In love, you act and you make me care
For you
Only for you.

Now I see, how life can be, when you’re with me.
My love is unending.
By your side, to share our lives, so we survive
Together we’ll face it.
Time in time, as we are one and we’ve just begun
To bring our hearts open.
On again, as we pretend, that life won’t end
Love is forever.

I am yours, for all my days
From this vow, I will not stray
I look at you and I see my dreams
You’re all I want and you’re what I need.
I am for you.
Only for you.


Now I see how life can be when you’re with me.
My love is unending.
By your side to share our lives so that we survive
Together we’ll face it.
Time in time as we are one and we’ve just begun
To bring our hearts open.
On again, as we pretend, that life won’t end

Love is forever.

Here is a link to the music I wrote for it
http://music.download.com/garyhutchings/3615-8743_32-100124828.html?tag=MDL_song_details#song100313032

whipped

Not sure what you mean. That song was when I was in love with her... I
guess you missed my other song that I wrote after we broke up.

Love In Vain

My Life....has become empty
No love....slowly dieing cold
I wish.....I'd seen it coming

Should have run................from you
could have hidden..............my heart
Would have run.................from you
Should have hidden.............my soul

Love in vain makes me insane

Why did you........take my life
How could you......say you were mine
Why did you........promise love
How could you......take it back again

Left me crawling in this pain
My love truly is in vain

My heart.....given only once
Your love....torn from me
I hate ......to be left alone

Should have run................from you
could have hidden..............my heart
Would have run.................from you
Should have hidden.............my soul

Love in vain makes me insane

Why did you........take my life
How could you......say you were mine
Why did you........promise love
How could you......take it back again

Left me crawling in this pain
My love truly is in vain


If by whipped you mean pussy whipped... True love is a blance...

If you mean anything else by whipped... Im sorry man ..I dont swing that
way... Good luck.
Gary

im sorry im have been drinking

No problem man.... I am pretty bitter about love.... If I had not seem
my parents have it till the day my dad died, I would think it a myth..
People try to tell me I dont know what real love feels like... But I
dissagree...I was blind and happy and loved with all my heart... She
always acted like she loved me as much, but didnt... I know what it felt
like and I will find it again some day ...

PS ...Im drinking too :)

Compma67, That is truly a deeply warm felt poem, I really could relate
to it. My deceased husband of 10 years would white me the way you felt
about your someone. I thinks it's beautiful! Nothing like true love,
being in love, a best friend, a partener, playing and goofing around and
just being yourself, and all that is just 1 person. I pray and hope I
will be able to experience this again in my life. Best wishes! Green
Eyes

Im glad you liked it... I felt it for sure....
Take care

Gary

its sad when you give your heart,soul and full committment to another
person, and then have them betray that love. I have been there more than
once,its keeps you from completely trusting ever again, i have met a
good man that loves me and i just cant let go of the hurt and betrayal
of the past.Im so afraid this will change his love for me he deserves
better .

Sorry to hear you have had it hard too... I still hold out for love
though.. Even if I never find it

Gary