I am an amateur song writer, stress the amateur. Here's one I've been working on. It's bit moody just to warn people ahead of time.


Now I can't see this world of peace,
but as it seems a dreamed up tomorrow,
and I don't know, if we change our ways,
that there may be an end to sorrow.

And hand of god has struck the hour,
It's time for me to go,
I know our love has built a tower,
Bu the dark sides of love I do know.
and as I lay down to lay to rest,
I think of all that has been said.
And a darkness grows within the depths,
of a lonely heart once again.

Now I can't see this world of peace,
but as it seems a dreamed up tomorrow,
and I don't know, if we change our ways,
that there may be an end to sorrow.

Believe in you, make the changes that make you whole,,,
Love you and love will then shine upon your soul,,


Nice very nice

Thanks.

I dug it. Some of the best songs are "moody". Life aint always beautiful, and our moods change. We need music for each emotion.