Topic: Cut Deep (old poem)
Rhage's photo
Thu 11/15/07 02:29 PM
My cut is so deep
I can barely creep
Blood spills out
Your lies i can doubt
What a horrifying sight
That i see in the night
I hate my life
Cut deep with a knife
I'm happy this way
The moon is my day
Darkness envelopes my soul
I hide underground like a mole.

I wrote this when i was dating a girl that caused drama everyday.

Queene123's photo
Thu 11/15/07 02:49 PM
your emotions were holding within as it may seem at one point or another she caused alot of chaos for you as where all you knew what to do or how to handle thses issue was to write and express your hidden anger for fear was within its self:cry:

no photo
Thu 11/15/07 02:53 PM
I read the first one, no comment. That and now this...a bit too morbid for me my friend, just MHO. I'll say this, life takes you where it leads you.