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My hopes, desires, and dreams
All but been shattered and cleaned You are but a beautiful dove Yet i don't know how to love You fly so high in the sky And i'am left here to die. Dedicated to the first girl i felt a connection to. But it ended badly. |
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It is good that you are able to write about your experience. Maybe it is acceptance and acceptance leads to healing.
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I try to get it out.
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Best way, I do hope you share more of your work with us, be it good, bad or indifferent.
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I will once i get inspiration to write another.
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Write about the weather or the changing seasons........... A tip; I like autumn
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I don't write anything about that. I mostly write about love and misery and pain.
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Well then, write about the pain that shoots through your fingers from the cold when you've been outdoors making snowmen
 That should be fun, yes?
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Out of the shadows, a double barrel shotgun... sry, my humor tends to be a little extreme.
I like to think more like... We flew together but we flew apart the wind rift between us broken like hearts damage has happened, but it is done now it's time to fly on to meet the new sun Tommorrow's another day... and there's another lonely out there waiting for you somewhere. |
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I guess it would work. I'll try it out and see what happens.
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That's the spirit, I write about anything that comes into my head. I may not be JK Rowling or EF Benson but I like to tell a story in prose form. I particularly like ancient subjects like the Roman Gladiators, Pharaohs, and any mythical creatures. There is tons to write about.
Hello Steelangel, your work is good too. My, it is lovely to see so much talent on the forum especially from young men. Thank you both for sharing |
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No problem. i just started like say last year.
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Some people has shown that it is possible to write a master piece with their first attempt at writing, the trick is to make others see your art from your view point, as the saying goes...........beauty is in the eye of the beholder
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Thats very true.
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So, does that mean we can look forward to some super writings from you? Oh, I do hope so
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