Topic: The story of and abusive relationshopI
IloveChatt's photo
Thu 11/15/07 02:58 AM
You left
We faught
I cried
You stared
I swore
You promised
We lied
I learned, but quickly forgot
You teased
I listened
You got to me
I pushed your buttons
You made me cry
I pushed you away
You appologised
Didnt mean anything
You choked me
I fought back
You reminded me of my mom.
I feared you
You pushed
I pushed back,
We fell
I landed
You flopped
You tried to be my dad
I regret it
You called me a b*tch
I said Id see you in hell
You pushed
I clawed
You hammered
I shot
You yelled
I cried
We forgot
I stopped loving you
I regret you
I pushed you away
I accept it
I made you hate me
I hated you first
I regret it.
You punched
I fell
You kicked
I got up
I cried
I screamed
I left
You followed
I ran
You ran
You hurt me
They hurt you
I win
You Lose.
You call
I dont answer.

yeahitsmeok's photo
Thu 11/15/07 03:18 AM
very well written cant wait to see what else you have up ur sleeve...flowerforyou

IloveChatt's photo
Thu 11/15/07 03:21 AM
Thanx, a whole bunch

Goofball73's photo
Thu 11/15/07 02:01 PM
Wow Chatt. That really spoke a lot even with the minimal amount of words that you used in every line (hope that makes sense). I too look forward to reading more of your stuff.

no photo
Fri 11/16/07 01:44 AM
very powerful:smile:

Noden's photo
Fri 11/16/07 04:59 AM
Very strong and indepth,look this was a nice piece, thank you, Ilovechattflowerforyou flowerforyou

IloveChatt's photo
Fri 11/16/07 11:17 AM
Yay, thanx you guys. I mine as well do some good from the evil

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 11/16/07 11:28 AM
Strength in those words in the end...

flowerforyou