Topic: The story of and abusive relationshopI | |
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You left
We faught I cried You stared I swore You promised We lied I learned, but quickly forgot You teased I listened You got to me I pushed your buttons You made me cry I pushed you away You appologised Didnt mean anything You choked me I fought back You reminded me of my mom. I feared you You pushed I pushed back, We fell I landed You flopped You tried to be my dad I regret it You called me a b*tch I said Id see you in hell You pushed I clawed You hammered I shot You yelled I cried We forgot I stopped loving you I regret you I pushed you away I accept it I made you hate me I hated you first I regret it. You punched I fell You kicked I got up I cried I screamed I left You followed I ran You ran You hurt me They hurt you I win You Lose. You call I dont answer. |
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very well written cant wait to see what else you have up ur sleeve...
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Thanx, a whole bunch
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Wow Chatt. That really spoke a lot even with the minimal amount of words that you used in every line (hope that makes sense). I too look forward to reading more of your stuff.
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very powerful
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Very strong and indepth,look this was a nice piece, thank you, Ilovechatt
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Yay, thanx you guys. I mine as well do some good from the evil
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Strength in those words in the end...
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