Topic: So..this is what I think of cheaters (a tad morbid, i warn)
DevonNicole's photo
Mon 11/12/07 12:03 PM
I wrote this after an ex cheated on me..so...I was a bit angry. It has passed, lol..

Violence
By Devon Riggan

Shattered glass upon the floor
Much like the shattered heart you left behind
My broken heart, my broken trust
And all the violence left inside

I pound my fists upon the walls
Scream aloud that you shall die
For breaking me, for leaving me
With all this violence left inside

Pouring rain streams down my face
Lightning flashes through my eyes
Everything is centered now
On all this violence left inside

And then I see you
And I can hear you
As you try hopelessly
To scream

But you are mine
No one can hear you
As I tear you apart
By the seams

Bleeding corpse upon the floor
Where shattered glass you once could find
My bloodied hands, my avenged soul
And still this violence left inside

© Devon Riggan; 2005

PookaLove's photo
Mon 11/12/07 12:06 PM
how do you get that little copywrite symbol to come up?

DevonNicole's photo
Mon 11/12/07 12:18 PM
I used the symbol tool in word and copied it over. But I believe you can also do it by holding the ALT key and pressing 0169 on the number pad (only the number pad keys will work for it)

Radon2000's photo
Mon 11/12/07 12:18 PM
i never found you dark, but that is a good poem.

DevonNicole's photo
Mon 11/12/07 12:31 PM
Thanks =]

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Mon 11/12/07 12:38 PM
Very good, lots of emotion. I wouldn't want to be the one that hurt you.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 11/12/07 07:17 PM
Dark but good write... flowerforyou

DevonNicole's photo
Mon 11/12/07 11:51 PM
Thank you, msteddybear :)