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Topic: My Love!
Pramod691 Joined Fri 08/19/16 Posts: 12	Wed 09/07/16 02:31 PM
The water pearls under sun, Just after The rain in spring, Looks so pretty, Looks so best One can neither create, Nor stop this beauty, The beauty of nature Which is the best on earth The shaded eyes, The rosy soft lips, A big smile on face, Lots of smartness, Loads of love, care, worry, I'm confused. I'm confused, that, best has another last degree, Present with you, You look bestest, You're beautiest, -me!

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Wed 09/07/16 02:42 PM
Nice

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Wed 09/07/16 02:59 PM
Very nice, Sir.

Integrityis1st Joined Sun 07/24/16 Posts: 9956	Wed 09/07/16 07:14 PM
I love the water pearls myself. water beads/pearls first time I heard that reference. nice & visual

Pramod691 Joined Fri 08/19/16 Posts: 12	Wed 09/07/16 08:27 PM
Thank you

Pramod691 Joined Fri 08/19/16 Posts: 12	Wed 09/07/16 08:28 PM
Will try to keep myself active here on this category. Let's see :) Thanks again all..

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