Topic: Painful words
SoonToBeDivorced's photo
Sat 11/10/07 05:44 PM
Like a Kansas twister,
They slash and blister.
Remnants remain
Tears are refrained










SoonToBeDivorced's photo
Sat 11/10/07 06:01 PM
Wow...no comments? Any ideas of how to make this better?

no photo
Sat 11/10/07 11:29 PM
soon...
we are not all perfect as some as long as it comes from the heart and with time it will
it is hard to get off the ground untill....
then it just hits you ..take your time and put some love and thought behind it
i am NOT a perfect at this myself and maybe never will but atleast i try

kc0003's photo
Sat 11/10/07 11:45 PM
dont write for the comments

write because you need to
write because you love to do it

write for the release
write for the therapy

write to express yourself
for all expression has beauty within it
and as long as you can see that then nothing else matters

most of all write for you
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 11/11/07 12:57 AM
flowerforyou

SoonToBeDivorced's photo
Sun 11/11/07 05:27 AM
Thanks all...I write from the heart, but I also like to hear corrections if needed.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 11/11/07 07:13 AM
Why refrain on the tears, best way to heal, okay, one of the best.