Topic: A Dream Within A Dream
tonyatoto's photo
Wed 11/08/06 11:45 AM
When we dream, we are relaxed and free,
Inside our dreams we have no more to see,
But when we dream within a dream,
Does this seduce reality and ease the screams,

When we see a bird as it glides with grace,
Or in a mirror we look that shows no face,
Do we leap with faith into a brand new land,
That is graced with comfort or just turns into sand,

The morning shows the tortures and trials,
And the hurdles we face like endless miles,
What we really fear does it show its face,
In the silence of dreams as they slowly surface,

Angelo42's photo
Wed 11/08/06 12:09 PM
wow that's a good poem do you have another?

tonyatoto's photo
Wed 11/08/06 12:21 PM
yes I have alot of them on here lol
go take a seek and see what you think!!

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Wed 11/08/06 12:24 PM
they are all good check them out..WILL

Angelo42's photo
Wed 11/08/06 12:35 PM
OK WELL CAN YOU SAY ANOTHER ONE?

tonyatoto's photo
Wed 11/08/06 12:39 PM
can I say another one
how about another two
oh wait that might
be three or four!
but it's to late
I forgot my core
so this is it
I have no more
but you just wait
on a nother date

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Wed 11/08/06 04:36 PM
: D WILL