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Topic: The Seduction of Perfection's Flaw
technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Wed 08/10/16 03:50 PM
Dreams occupy slumbers cradle. In these heavens, prayers for the divine conjure magnificence tease. If not for the prospect of winged apparitions, harp notes sour. What sweet music could shade hopes amber glow? Attainments summit bathes in dewy mist glisten. Will hints and wisps have ambition to rise in defiance of rains cleanse? From victories precipice, jubilant hands may touch the angels face. Dare I risk poisoning the grace of glory, with mortalities plague?

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Wed 08/10/16 04:19 PM
Nice Tech

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Thu 08/11/16 09:08 PM
Thanks for taking time to read and comment, Joe.

tmh1063 Joined Fri 07/01/16 Posts: 1965	Thu 08/11/16 10:11 PM
Very nicely written.

jacktrades Joined Tue 09/11/12 Posts: 4395	Fri 08/12/16 12:46 AM
I do not have a poetic bone in my body ,and I am very impressed with someone like yourself who has such a command over words and can blend in thoughts and emotion to go with them.Good job Sir.

Bahitieva Joined Mon 11/23/15 Posts: 2443	Fri 08/12/16 12:53 AM
Love this..

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Fri 08/12/16 10:44 PM
I really appreciate y'all checking it out and sharing your thoughts, it means a lot.

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