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joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Fri 08/05/16 03:43 PM
I heard an Orchestra An angel playing her harp Birds sang freely The sweet sound came willowing across the ocean I saw the moon Surrounded by a billion stars They seemed to shine in my direction Dazzling me beyond reproach A cosmic supernova exploded at my feet I felt butterflies, they circled inside me I thought the earth spun out of control I lost all of my senses Paralysed by beauty The day you said hello

SitkaRains Joined Thu 10/09/08 Posts: 17228	Fri 08/05/16 04:51 PM
Good Job Joe, I so enjoy reading what you write.. I can just breath your words... Thank you so much... I Heard the music I saw the stars I felt the butterflies..

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Fri 08/05/16 06:05 PM Edited by lu_rosemary on Fri 08/05/16 06:39 PM
Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing!

Two Joined Thu 06/02/16 Posts: 13917	Fri 08/05/16 06:10 PM
That's really nice Joe. I have no writing ability whatsoever so I am always in awe of those that do and share. Thank you.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Fri 08/05/16 06:36 PM
Elation personified. A treat to read, Joe.

Bahitieva Joined Mon 11/23/15 Posts: 2443	Fri 08/05/16 08:14 PM
Hi Joe, Really beautiful!! Love this... It is like... when you fall in love..... and you know it..

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Sun 08/07/16 03:02 PM
Thank you all

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Sun 08/07/16 03:10 PM
Hellion ... Laughing .. Did you just blush joey .. Such beauty No I never But I am now reading your post lol

tmh1063 Joined Fri 07/01/16 Posts: 1965	Sun 08/07/16 06:48 PM
So beautifully written Joe.

sanjeet2 Joined Sun 09/21/14 Posts: 1	Wed 08/10/16 03:10 AM
hi

Redbutterfly098 Joined Tue 08/19/14 Posts: 2761	Wed 08/10/16 05:49 AM
Beautiful poem...☺☺☺

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