Topic: Falling for a stranger
EntitledLover's photo
Fri 08/05/16 02:44 PM
Your eyes hold me
enveloped in your gaze
I'm so enchanted
I dare not turn away
I wonder how long
will we play this game
They all talk around us,
but we're enchanted in a daze
I'll never look into
another's eyes the same
wrapped in adoration
my heart is set ablaze
Don't fall away later,
and say it's just a phase
I couldn't bare those words
when we are so amazed
by secrets that are held
in our unspoked gazes
Like we're to lovers sitting here,
longing for embraces
hoping that we'll find away
into each other's arms
I have a strange feeling
you'll never do me harm
now they're all looking at us
And I feel a slight shove
They vie for our attention
as we're falling in love
What's all the commotion for?
Nobody's in danger
this is how it looks when you're falling for a stranger



EntitledLover's photo
Fri 08/05/16 04:30 PM
excuse the typos.

no photo
Fri 08/05/16 04:45 PM
nice

no photo
Fri 08/05/16 04:47 PM

Your eyes hold me
enveloped in your gaze
I'm so enchanted
I dare not turn away
I wonder how long
will we play this game
They all talk around us,
but we're enchanted in a daze
I'll never look into
another's eyes the same
wrapped in adoration
my heart is set ablaze
Don't fall away later,
and say it's just a phase
I couldn't bare those words
when we are so amazed
by secrets that are held
in our unspoked gazes
Like we're to lovers sitting here,
longing for embraces
hoping that we'll find away
into each other's arms
I have a strange feeling
you'll never do me harm
now they're all looking at us
And I feel a slight shove
They vie for our attention
as we're falling in love
What's all the commotion for?
Nobody's in danger
this is how it looks when you're falling for a stranger








SitkaRains's photo
Fri 08/05/16 04:49 PM

Your eyes hold me
enveloped in your gaze
I'm so enchanted
I dare not turn away
I wonder how long
will we play this game
They all talk around us,
but we're enchanted in a daze
I'll never look into
another's eyes the same
wrapped in adoration
my heart is set ablaze
Don't fall away later,
and say it's just a phase
I couldn't bare those words
when we are so amazed
by secrets that are held
in our unspoked gazes
Like we're to lovers sitting here,
longing for embraces
hoping that we'll find away
into each other's arms
I have a strange feeling
you'll never do me harm
now they're all looking at us
And I feel a slight shove
They vie for our attention
as we're falling in love
What's all the commotion for?
Nobody's in danger
this is how it looks when you're falling for a stranger





Good Job I liked it..Thank youflowerforyou

EntitledLover's photo
Fri 08/05/16 06:19 PM
Thanks! ^.^

no photo
Fri 08/05/16 06:22 PM
Thank you, Lady.
Welcome to mingle2. flowerforyou

EntitledLover's photo
Fri 08/05/16 09:46 PM
Thank you!

no photo
Fri 08/05/16 11:48 PM
very nice. Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

EntitledLover's photo
Sat 08/06/16 01:38 PM
Thank you. Np. :)

tmh1063's photo
Thu 08/11/16 10:14 PM
I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it.

no photo
Thu 08/18/16 12:16 PM
long for embraces or embrace of eyes....???!!!
good..

Conrad_73's photo
Thu 08/18/16 01:47 PM
Edited by Conrad_73 on Thu 08/18/16 01:48 PM
"Mr. Roark, we're alone here. Why don't you tell me what you think of me? In any words you wish. No one will hear us."
"But I don't think of you."

Chapter XV, p. 413 ; Ellsworth Toohey and Howard Roark
(The Fountainhead) A.Rand

Marley_ceez's photo
Sat 08/20/16 06:14 PM
That's amazing! really got into it :)

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Sun 08/21/16 10:34 AM
Very creative. My poem is shorter.

Looking for love on mingle
Someone sweet, kind and single

The end. lol

basco41's photo
Fri 08/26/16 10:12 AM

Very creative. My poem is shorter.

Looking for love on mingle
Someone sweet, kind and single

The end. lol


:heart: this

basco41's photo
Fri 08/26/16 10:15 AM

Your eyes hold me
enveloped in your gaze
I'm so enchanted
I dare not turn away
I wonder how long
will we play this game
They all talk around us,
but we're enchanted in a daze
I'll never look into
another's eyes the same
wrapped in adoration
my heart is set ablaze
Don't fall away later,
and say it's just a phase
I couldn't bare those words
when we are so amazed
by secrets that are held
in our unspoked gazes
Like we're to lovers sitting here,
longing for embraces
hoping that we'll find away
into each other's arms
I have a strange feeling
you'll never do me harm
now they're all looking at us
And I feel a slight shove
They vie for our attention
as we're falling in love
What's all the commotion for?
Nobody's in danger
this is how it looks when you're falling for a stranger





This is a masterpiece of Emotional Expression:heart: