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The feeling that I get, the blood, sweat, and tears
I've consistently developed these on the search for something greater Lonely nights, aimless days, taking my time to learn someone else It's not great when you realize they no longer know themselves Caught up in what someone else says, keeping up with the joneses No longer able to realize the wealth they have, stored at home Here but never there, gone, long gone All of the signs that tell you it's all wrong After all the time invested, the thoughts you've ingested The complaints you've corrected after the ideas been suggested Telling her time and time again that you're the only one and you're there But finally contemplating about what's happened your whole life You've really discovered you've been there by yourself. |
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Very nicely written, it's hard, that's why it's best first to be happy with yourself first, and then if it happens it happens. I also have some cats and puppy dogs, that love me unconditionally..
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Thank you. I appreciate the comment that it's written nicely, that and the first one on this site were spur of the moment. Unfortunately I don't know several techniques of writing or these could be different. Pets will always keep someone happy, I've found several people in my life that have made me happy in my past, but circumstances change and I still continue to remain happy with myself.
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Truth
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Very well expressed!
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