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my heart was breaking
shattered like a crystal ball somewhere along the way not sure of who i was at all memories of what had happened haunted me through the halls and then one day you came along and just when i felt i couldnt go on you opened up my once broken heart and it once again had a song no longer afraid of letting someone in the shattered glass and haunting memories washed out like the tides roll in once again i have hope and once again i can feel |
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great poem
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thank you jedi
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you're welcome Hun
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beautifully written. Good Job
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very nice poem thanks for sharing
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thank you aris and bell
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thank you,really strikes a chord
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thank you
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beautiful fallen.....but put some clothes on.....your making me cold....giggle.
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lol@feralcat
thank you |
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Very lovely fallin
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Beautiful Fallin.
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thank you rocker and karma
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Dana simply beautiful
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thank you jenni.. means alot coming from someone so full of beautiful words
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