Topic: A Lover's Regret
Sentimentallover's photo
Sun 06/26/16 08:02 AM
If you have done her wrong with your grievous mistakes, hope is not lost; there might still be a chance. Most women love humble and sincere men that admit their mistakes,and aren't too boastful or arrogant to apologize. I hope this helps:


A Lover’s Regret

Never appreciated you, I did, until you were gone.
You gave me all and I gave you nothing.
I long for you, like a troubled soul longs for dawn.
I do not deserve the holy essence of your being.

You were patient and forgiving, loving and tender;
I long for a glance into your beautifully luminous eyes.
Always generous and warm, you were; never a pretender.
A week is all we had; never enough; bittersweet goodbyes.

I long for a kiss from your sweet lips.
You make me want to be a better man.
I long for your slender waist to hold, which floats and dips.
All I need is to be with you, so meticulously, I dwell and plan.

All I need is one more chance.
I will undo my wrongs and honor our timeless romance.


Authored by myself; Sherif Mohamed 2016

Kimpey1969's photo
Sun 06/26/16 09:37 AM
That's really nice and heart felt I hope you got a second chance :hugging::hugging:

Sentimentallover's photo
Sun 06/26/16 11:34 AM
Thank you so much for your compliment Kimpey, but this isn't about me; my writing encompasses many things and many different topics; it's my nature as a writer. There is so much going on in my tiny brain :)

1Marie63's photo
Sun 06/26/16 11:48 AM
Lovely flowerforyou

Sentimentallover's photo
Sun 06/26/16 01:34 PM
Thanks Marie!