Topic: This is a very truthful, but cruel poem.
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Sun 11/04/07 04:53 AM
This is not for the light hearted. read at your own risk.

Free

What is truly pure?
Is it a spring bud
or flowing water so near
Or maybe your own blood?

what is so clean?
The house of a maid
A floor so shiny you can be seen
Or the mirror when you wipe off the blade?

What is sickness?
When the fever inside is lit
When your body is weakness
Or when your stinging throat comes from a toilet?

What it getting better?
The meds on a doctors shelf
Maybe your boyfriends loving letter
Or the power you feel from starving yourself?

What is being hurt?
Is it an old one naturally dying
Is it a criminal going to court
Or a woman, raped and left crying?

What is being free?
Is it looking at the clear blue sky
Is it dreaming of what you want to be
Or is it hating yourself to suicide?

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Sun 11/04/07 04:56 AM
hmmmmmmmmmmmm not that faint at heart..........been there done that........

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Sun 11/04/07 05:00 AM
Nice poem!!!flowerforyou

Katertots37's photo
Sun 11/04/07 05:01 AM
Very nice

Puffins1958's photo
Sun 11/04/07 05:04 AM
Nice....

It's say it was very intruiging

flowerforyou