It was like a grain of sand transmuted to pearl.
She's was a comet, crash landed, spreading life to my world.
Structure and foundation
were an underground basement.
Crumbled castle is now a chapel,
housing statues and murals.

She excavated my skull and elevated my soul.
Her words, a novocaine to numb the ache in my bones.
She was my alchemist stone, for the chain that had broken, had not only been fixed,
But was changed into gold.

Patiently, she waits for me.
Recovering all the strength I need.
Her loveliness, a tranquil breeze.
Embraces me, a taste of peace.

Your poem is gorgeous :)

Wow I have read this 3x and I get more each time
Great job

I absolutely feel this..gave me a delicate
shiver of remembrance~
Thank you.

Really good poem, jfinn009. I like your style.

Wow guys! Thank you for taking the time to read and the positive feedback is much appreciated. I'm happy to have stumbled across this forum. It's nice to have a convenient means for us to share our common interests and talents. The poetry each of you compose is impressive! I am absolutely looking forward to reading more, so keep up the good work!

Much love.

It's a W-O-W!!!
Nice scribbling.....

I like this. Very beautiful. Nice words