Topic: profile
carvaz69's photo
Sun 04/24/16 04:19 PM
Can you ladies tell me what you think about my profile? what else can I add or delete to make it more appealing?blushing

AlphaB2Eros88's photo
Tue 04/26/16 04:50 PM

Can you ladies tell me what you think about my profile? what else can I add or delete to make it more appealing?blushing


Well seeing as you are only looking for No Strings Attached/Intimate encounters. That play off of safe free clean fun. I would highlight that and then be done with it. You repeat it over and over again. It also seems like your interest list is only 3 things add 2 more items or even put in the interest section NSA or something about discretion if that is indeed what you are offering.

your bio

Looking for a female for fun times NSA, very clean, handsome, no drugs or diseases, extremely discrete, d/d free, super clean, decently endowed and orally talented. A true pleaser. Love to go "downtown", long lasting, always smell good, very respectful, a gentleman that knows how to treat a lady and always make sure she's well-taken care of.. I'm on yahoo.com same username as here:carvaz69


Wel that's all well and good but let's try Hi my name is blank... I'm just a blank Disease free Male looking for some NSA intimacy. I pride myself on (Blank Skills)/(Discretion) I like to do (Blank) and will treat you like (blank) I'm not looking for (blank) let me know if you are interested in me I can be reached at (Blank)

** Seeing as you seem to only be friends with younger gal's I would state exactly what you are into or looking for. If you want NSA try harder you are not the only roster trying to get at the hen's on this site. Try and make yourself stand out just a bit more. These are my honest evaluation. Take it for what its worth.**

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Tresa


Robxbox73's photo
Tue 04/26/16 09:18 PM


Can you ladies tell me what you think about my profile? what else can I add or delete to make it more appealing?blushing


Well seeing as you are only looking for No Strings Attached/Intimate encounters. That play off of safe free clean fun. I would highlight that and then be done with it. You repeat it over and over again. It also seems like your interest list is only 3 things add 2 more items or even put in the interest section NSA or something about discretion if that is indeed what you are offering.

your bio

Looking for a female for fun times NSA, very clean, handsome, no drugs or diseases, extremely discrete, d/d free, super clean, decently endowed and orally talented. A true pleaser. Love to go "downtown", long lasting, always smell good, very respectful, a gentleman that knows how to treat a lady and always make sure she's well-taken care of.. I'm on yahoo.com same username as here:carvaz69


Wel that's all well and good but let's try Hi my name is blank... I'm just a blank Disease free Male looking for some NSA intimacy. I pride myself on (Blank Skills)/(Discretion) I like to do (Blank) and will treat you like (blank) I'm not looking for (blank) let me know if you are interested in me I can be reached at (Blank)

** Seeing as you seem to only be friends with younger gal's I would state exactly what you are into or looking for. If you want NSA try harder you are not the only roster trying to get at the hen's on this site. Try and make yourself stand out just a bit more. These are my honest evaluation. Take it for what its worth.**

V/r
Tresa




Teresa,
Very well done! To the point and exacto! Nice new pic!
:thumbsup:

PacificStar48's photo
Tue 04/26/16 10:55 PM

Can you ladies tell me what you think about my profile? what else can I add or delete to make it more appealing?blushing


Delete the text in it's entirety as it is way to much information; and patently offensive in it's entirety. Clear enough when you state seeking intimate encounter and the shirtless picture.