"A touching love story that 'll make u cry"


10th Grade:-
As I sat there in English class,
I stared at the girl next to me.
She was my so called 'best friend'.
I stared at her long, silky hair,
and wished she was mine.
But she didn't notice me like that,
and I knew it.
After class,
she walked up to me and asked me for
the notes she had missed the day before.
I handed them to her.She said 'thanks'
and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her, I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.


11th grade:-
The phone rang. On the other end,
it was her. She was in tears,
mumbling on and on about how
her love had broke her heart.
She asked me to come over
because she didn't want to be alone, So I did.
As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her
soft eyes, wishing she was mine.
After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie,
and three bags of chips,
she decided to go home.
She looked at me, said 'thanks'
and gave me a kiss
on the cheek..I want to tell her,
I want her to know that
I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.


Senior year:-
One fine day she walked to my locker.
"My date is sick" she said,
"hes not gonna go" well,
I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade,
we made a promise that
if neither of us had dates,
we would go together just as 'best friends'.
So we did.
That night, after everything was over,
I was standing at her front door step.
I stared at her as She smiled at me
and stared at me with her crystal eyes.
Then she said- "I had the best time, thanks!"
and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.


Graduation:-
A day passed, then a week, then a month.
Before I could blink, it was graduation day.
I watched as her perfect body
floated like an angel
up on stage to get her diploma.
I wanted her to be mine-but
she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it.
Before everyone went home,
she came to me in her smock and hat,
and cried as I hugged her.
Then she lifted her head from my shoulder
and said- 'you're my best friend,
thanks' and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.


Marriage:-
Now I sit in the pews of the church.
That girl is getting married now.
and drive off to her new life,
married to another man.
I wanted her to be mine,
but she didn't see me like that,
and I knew it.
But before she drove away,
she came to me and said 'you came !'.
She said 'thanks' and kissed me on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.


Death:-
Years passed, I looked down at the coffin
of a girl who used to be my 'best friend'.
At the service, they read a diary entry
she had wrote in her high school years.
This is what it read:
'I stare at him wishing he was mine,
but he doesn't notice me like that,
and I know it.
I want to tell him,
I want him to know that
I don't want to be just friends,
I love him but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.


I wish he would tell me he loved me !
.........'I wish I did too...'


I thought to my self, and I cried.

that is so touching, i think i'l cry myself to sleep now

Hi Soleiman,

Really touching.....

Found myself crying after reading this.

Hey,bunch of thanks.But i should let You know that You got a gorgeous smile and You looks too pretty when You smile and this smile perfectly suits on your face.So keep smiling...And i should let you know bit more that You looks horrible when You cry...and i'm not gonna say any words if you cry.as far i know,every girl wants to be pretty,so will you smile or cry to look pretty or horrible....hahaha.just kidding... :P

Anyway,I've one question for You miss @blondey

Hey Bahitieva,Can I call You only eva if You dont mind....its bit hard for me to utter your name. :)

Anyway,Do You know,You've such beautiful big big lovable innocent eyes...I love Your eyes and for using eye shadow on those eyes,Eyes looks wow...And Do you think,i am gonna make your eyes cry when you have such pretty eyes and cuty face....and do You've any idea how gorgeous You looks in smile! i hate your crying eyes.Now better you decide,You want love from me or hate? Though i dont have hate in my heart...hahaha.just kidding.... :D @eva

First of all,I cant choose question wisely....Cause i'm kind of stupid and idiot.hahaha

The question is,You dont have blonde hair cause Your hair looks black and You also dont have blonde looks then why Your name blondey?hahaha.some guys also assume,blonde mean=too hot/sexy type,i dont wanna go in deep....


Though I know Your real name not blondey,so Can i know whats the nice name of this smiling girl?


And is Your eyes blue?I love blue eyes much to be honest.but i never seen anyone in real with bule eyes.... :)

See,i taken permission for one question but asked 3.hahaha.told you at first,i am stupid...:D @Blondey

You'll cry before you sleeping now....

and i will go for sleep except watching your face...Cause All i seen is,You looks too dark..hahaha@unknown one

You have an amazing style to reach our capture the reader from the very beginning..
Thank you so very much I had to read it twice, to make sure I captured everything.

Thank you Soleiman.

You make my day. Suddenly, the day look brighter..( it is 11.20am here)

Keep on writing. You are really good.

Hahaha,thanks for being so nice.You made me smile....And Let me know You,I love rain much,wetting in rain,outside in rain,rain sounds,romance in rain,movie and foods in rain.don't you love rain too?and As Your name also rain,so let me tell You that I love You too very very much.have a great day! enjoy! :) @rains

Thanks for the nice words dreamy girl Eva. :)

and to be sorry,I'm not a writer.I am auditor (chartered Accountant).and As by my profession,we are quiet boring type,not that such interesting....hahaha


And Please never fully depend on anyone cause You're enough to make Your day brighter.Love is a big word! and people becoming cruel day after day...its increasing.whatever,Just always smile,love fully and enjoy life! cheers! and oh! forgot to tell you,I love You very very much. @eva

So,You given my name casanova,Hahaha.Love this name,thats too cute and sweet! :)

Oh! No,I dont wanna be wise,I wanna be stupid,wanna keep myself like idiot,wanna do every crazy stupid task in my life,thats what life about! hahaha.You also should be stupid with me! enjoy!!


Oh! You from UK?but presently You may be in NZ.....Why I'm always unlucky,i did finish my graduation from UK but i never got chance to met with such a pretty girl like You.my bad luck! :/


Oh! I see,You changed hair colour that mean did colour...But Your black hair didn't trick me,Your pretty,beauty,gorgeous,stunning and smiling face & looks did trick me..... :D


lol,its your life,do whatever you wanna do,whatever you wanna be,whatever you wanna talk,You are the only owner and controller of your own lyf,none can force you,so You dont need Your partner permission to change Your hair colour! But blonde may be was more cute or redhead better may be sometimes! If he stops you to change colour then he should make u understand by love and care,not by order.lol :P


I have One plan for your hair....As You got long hair so bind me tightly in your love for forever through those hair.hahaha.


I love blue eyes though deep black also good to look too.I wanna see Your blue eyes,Can You keep your eyes on my eyes for some minutes?hahaha


Hahaha,Okay I'll call You blondey but let me give You a name as You given me.I'll call You butterfly then... <3

whatever,how are You today?

oh! forgot to tell,why i always get forget,I love You butterfly,I really love You very very much.hahaha. wink :*


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